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Current Talk '24 I / Re: The Return of Yet Another New Slideshow (Sort of)
« on: April 11, 2015, 03:30:16 AM »
And also coming before tomorrow's scene in the slideshow is another sequence without any dialogue:
End of sequence. And it's also the second act break of the pilot.
And as for what's different, Scenes 102B and 102C do not appear in any version of the pilot - with Scene 102D, the door to the secret room is already open and we actually see Willie on the floor before we see the "dark Figure," who does not close the door before he moves past Willie to the wall at the back of the secret room - instead of what's scripted, Scene 102E actually depicts the Figure pulling a ring in the wall, which in turn causes a stone in the wall to partially pop out, whereupon the Figure pulls the stone all the way out and puts it down on the floor before the chest is removed from inside the wall in Scene 102F.
102A EXT. CEMETERY - NIGHT The Mausoleum rises above the rest of the graves, eerie in the last darkness just before dawn... CAMERA IS LOW, FOLLOWING the soft, old-fashioned, men's boots and long cape moving rapidly through the graveyard into the Mausoleum. 102B INT. MAUSOLEUM - NIGHT FOLLOWING as the Figure sweeps down the narrow, stone flight of stairs into the burial crypt. 102C CLOSE - LION'S HEAD As the hand with the BLACK STONE RING, grasps the rusted iron opening device, twists and pulls it. As before, we HEAR the SOUND OF HEAVY STONES GRATING, as the wall moves, revealing the entrance to the Secret Room. l02D SECRET ROOM GOING WITH the dark Figure as he enters, the stone wall closing behind him. The Figure moves past the open sarcophagus, where we see a semi-conscious Willie lying on the floor, a terrible wound on his neck, his eyes fluttering open. l02E ANGLE - STONE FLOOR In a corner of the room, where a heavy iron ring is set in the stone floor. Momentarily, the hand reaches in, grasps it, pulls mightily upward ... as a small three-foot portion of the floor opens. 102F THE OPENING And down inside ... an old brass-bracketed MARINER'S CHEST ... The strong hands reach in, lift it out, open it. It is brimming with gem stones, GOLD and SILVER COINS, JEWELRY, and other precious valuables. A moment, and then the hands reach in, scooping up handfuls of the sparkling treasure. A beat, then... |
End of sequence. And it's also the second act break of the pilot.
And as for what's different, Scenes 102B and 102C do not appear in any version of the pilot - with Scene 102D, the door to the secret room is already open and we actually see Willie on the floor before we see the "dark Figure," who does not close the door before he moves past Willie to the wall at the back of the secret room - instead of what's scripted, Scene 102E actually depicts the Figure pulling a ring in the wall, which in turn causes a stone in the wall to partially pop out, whereupon the Figure pulls the stone all the way out and puts it down on the floor before the chest is removed from inside the wall in Scene 102F.