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Current Talk '24 I / Re: And Now The Return of Another New Slideshow (Sort of), Part 2 [**Now featuring alternate versions of scenes - see replies #18,#21,#23,#49,#64,#69,#76,#88,#90,#100,#105,#107,#115**]
« on: June 12, 2017, 09:44:00 PM »
Wrapping up Scene 114, as scripted:
And that's when Saturday's quote -
- comes up.
And when it comes to the dialogue, the directions, and the descriptions, again, things don't quite play as laid out in the script because Barnabas doesn't quite roar when he straightens up, nor does he viciously slash Willie across the face - though what Barnabas does do is grab Willie by the lapels of his coat and -
- violently swings him about until, still holding Willie by the lapels, Barnabas delivers the first sentence of his quote -
- which he actually delivers as "Get her out, Willie", and then after turning to look -
- down at Carolyn, who obviously didn't fall to the floor in a faint after Willie pulled Barnabas off of her because, as we already mentioned last time, she's lying on the circular settee, Barnabas delivers the "She has desecrated" part of the second sentence in his quote as we see -
- a closer shot of Carolyn and her bleeding wound, followed by Barnabas seen holding Willie from a different angle as he finishes -
- the second part of the second sentence of his quote with "this room" before pushing Willie away (and since Willie wasn't slashed across the face, we do not see any blood running from Willie's mouth) and beginning to run from the room as -
- he shouts the third sentence from his quote "Get her out!!!" - and then the camera moves into a close-up of -
- Josette's music box on the mantle...
Barnabas suddenly straightens up with a roar and Carolyn falls to the floor in a faint. He slashes Willie viciously across the face. Blood runs from Willie's mouth. Barnabas turns, looks at Carolyn. She lies there sobbing. |
And that's when Saturday's quote -
Page 46/Scene 114 - Barnabas: 'Get her out of here. She has desecrated this room. Get her out!!!'
- comes up.
And when it comes to the dialogue, the directions, and the descriptions, again, things don't quite play as laid out in the script because Barnabas doesn't quite roar when he straightens up, nor does he viciously slash Willie across the face - though what Barnabas does do is grab Willie by the lapels of his coat and -
- violently swings him about until, still holding Willie by the lapels, Barnabas delivers the first sentence of his quote -
- which he actually delivers as "Get her out, Willie", and then after turning to look -
- down at Carolyn, who obviously didn't fall to the floor in a faint after Willie pulled Barnabas off of her because, as we already mentioned last time, she's lying on the circular settee, Barnabas delivers the "She has desecrated" part of the second sentence in his quote as we see -
- a closer shot of Carolyn and her bleeding wound, followed by Barnabas seen holding Willie from a different angle as he finishes -
- the second part of the second sentence of his quote with "this room" before pushing Willie away (and since Willie wasn't slashed across the face, we do not see any blood running from Willie's mouth) and beginning to run from the room as -
- he shouts the third sentence from his quote "Get her out!!!" - and then the camera moves into a close-up of -
- Josette's music box on the mantle...