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Caption This! - Vicki's Arrival-Burke's Revenge-Matthew Morgan-Introducing Josette / Re: Episode #0063
« on: April 13, 2024, 06:25:11 PM »
I bet she isn't!!
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"Dock your sardine boats, fellas, it's going to be a choppy night!!"
Bob didn’t like asking for a tip so he had his sock puppet ask for him.
Moving to the next parts of the sequence, and they actually deviate a bit from the way they're scripted, but here's how today's quotes are scripted to appear:
138 INT - COTTAGE - NIGHT 138
And that's when today's first quote -Page 68/Scene 138 - Alex (on telephone): 'That's great. Listen, Trace, Claire and I should go to New York tonight. I thought we'd stop in Burton's Gallery. He's an authority on Early American artists, isn't he?'
- comes up, followed by today's second quote -Page 68/Scene 138 - Tracy: 'The best. Why?'
- coming up.
And as far as any difference in the dialogue goes, the "That's great" part of Alex' quote is dropped because it refers to Tracy's dropped line about Quentin not painting in the tower anymore - and the remainder of his quote is actually delivered as "Uh, listen, Trace, uh, Claire and I should go to New York tonight. And we thought we'd stop in at, uh, Burton's Gallery. He's an authority on Early American artists, isn't he?" - and Tracy's actual reply is "Well, I think he's the best. Why?", which gives a background to Tracy that is too bad the script didn't explore further.
And as far as any differences in the directions and descriptions go, there's nothing to get into there. However, the quotes don't all play at the cottage. Only up to Alex telling Tracy that he and Claire are going to NY -
- plays at the cottage (and as I'd mentioned earlier, Claire is seen as having moved to the table). After that, things shift back to the Card Room at Collinwood as Tracy listens to Alex telling her about -
- how he and Claire are going to go to Burton's Gallery and he asks if he's an authority on Early American artists - plus, as can obviously be seen in today's second capture -
- Tracy offering her opinion that Burton is the best and wondering why Alex asks also plays at Collinwood.
80 INT - SARAH'S ROOM 80 It is obviously a child's room. Carlotta stands on the other side of the four poster bed. She is straightening the stuffed animals that are propped there. 80 CONTD CONTD 80 QUENTIN I saw a little girl in that window. CARLOTTA Little girl? Quentin crosses to the window and looks out. QUENTIN I was outside -- CARLOTTA I know. I saw you from the window. QUENTIN But I didn't see you. I saw a child...holding a teddy bear... He looks around the room. CARLOTTA Yes, this is a little girl's room. It was Mrs. Stoddard's when she was a child. It must have been a trick of light. FLASH CUT - LITTLE GIRL IN THE WINDOW as he remember's what he saw. QUENTIN - CLOSE-UP QUENTIN Yes , it must have been. Then not knowing what else to do QUENTIN Well I'd better get to work. He EXITS toward the tower as she stands there watching him go. |
Continuing and wrapping up Scene 137, beginning with today's first quote -Page 67/Scene 137 - Alex: 'Are you sure?...Did you get into the tower?'
- coming up, followed by today's second quote -Page 67/Scene 137 - Tracy: 'He's not even painting there anymore. He's his old self again.'
- coming up.
End of scene - but certainly not end of sequence.
And when it comes to any differences in the dialogue, the directions, or the descriptions, there obviously aren't any directions or descriptions, and there's no way to know what might have been different about the dialogue because neither of today's quotes appear in the film as it currently stands. And considering that both quotes harken back to Scene 113, a scene that doesn't appear in any version of the film, chances are quite likely that even if today's quotes were shot, they're also not in the 129 minute version of the film...
Moving on to the next scene:
CUT TO:
136 INT - COTTAGE - NIGHT 136
Claire and Alex sit by the fire. The telephone
rings. Alex gets up. Claire watches him from the
B.G.[/coor]
And that's when today's quote -Page 67/Scene 136 - Alex: 'Hello? Tracy? What's wrong?'
- comes up, followed in the script by:
In the B.G. Claire rises.
End of scene.
And as far as any difference in the dialogue goes, Alex actually says "Hello? Tracy, honey, what's wrong?"
And as far as any differences in the directions and descriptions go, as can be seen in the following capture, Claire is indeed sitting by the fire and reading a book, but an already standing Alex -
- actually comes from the direction of the desk behind the couch to answer the already ringing phone, and as he makes his way to the phone, Claire does not watch him because her attention is only on the book in her lap - but as can be seen in today's capture, Alex' words certainly capture Claire's attention, though -
- we don't see her rise. (However, when next we see Alex in upcoming Scene 138, Claire will be standing at the table with him, so it's quite possible that Claire rising was shot but it didn't make it into the film - well, at least not as it currently stands...)
And jumping to the next scene:
CARD ROOM
137 INT - COLLINWOOD -LIMBO - TELEPHONE AREA- 137
NIGHT
And that's when today's quote -Page 67/Scene 137 - Tracy (on telephone): 'Oh, Alex, how gloomy you are. I called to say everything's perfect.'
- comes up.
And as far as any difference in the dialogue goes, what's scripted is delivered exactly as written, but there's an addition because Tracy actually says "Oh, Alex, how gloomy you are. There's nothing's wrong. I called to say everything's perfect."
And as far as any differences in the directions and descriptions go, as can be deduced from the crossing out in DC's script as well as today's capture -
- the only thing is that Scene 137 takes place in the Card Room rather than some Limbo Telephone Area.
And tomorrow the slideshow will be dealing with material from this sequence that was dropped - or at least dropped from the film as it currently stands...