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« on: August 10, 2017, 02:24:05 AM »
Another scene in DC's script that we need to deal with before we come to tomorrow's quote in the slideshow:
End of scene - though certainly not end of sequence.
And when it comes to the dialogue, the descriptions, the directions, and the notations, the interesting thing here is in DC's script this scene has a box drawn around it and an X drawn in the box, which usually means DC didn't plan to shoot it - but a version of it does appear in the film. And unfortunately, whatever notes referred to that are on the "other side" aren't in the DS Movie Book, so we have no way of knowing what they are. But what we do know is that in the version of the scene that appears in the film, after the shadow of a man coming from the stairwell appears on the floor of -
- the second floor corridor, a deputy emerges -
- from the stairwell and makes his way to -
- the first room on his left, where the door is already open - and as he enters the room he asks "Is everything okay?", a reworking of the dialogue in the script, as Todd comes into view lying asleep in his bed and we see another deputy sitting in a chair by Todd's bed -
- and after the second deputy nods in the affirmative, the first deputy nods to him and turns to -
- make his way out.
The end. No going to the room being used as the Sheriff's base of operations.
145 INT: COLLINWOOD - SECOND FLOOR CORRIDOR - NIGHT 145 CAMERA IS TIGHT on a DEPUTY, TRUCKING IN FRONT OF HIM as he walks down the corridor to Todd's room. He NOTES opens Todd's door as SHOT WIDENS revealing Todd lying ON in bed. Another DEPUTY is standing beside bed. The OTHER two deputies nod to each other. The first deputy SIDE closes the door and starts walking along corridor in opposite direction, passing the CAMERA, which then starts to TRUCK AFTER HIM. When he reaches door to Sheriff's headquarters, we see the Sheriff and Stokes sitting there in front of a two-way radio. The room has been set up as a base of operations. DEPUTY Everything's fine. He's sleeping. |
End of scene - though certainly not end of sequence.
And when it comes to the dialogue, the descriptions, the directions, and the notations, the interesting thing here is in DC's script this scene has a box drawn around it and an X drawn in the box, which usually means DC didn't plan to shoot it - but a version of it does appear in the film. And unfortunately, whatever notes referred to that are on the "other side" aren't in the DS Movie Book, so we have no way of knowing what they are. But what we do know is that in the version of the scene that appears in the film, after the shadow of a man coming from the stairwell appears on the floor of -
- the second floor corridor, a deputy emerges -
- from the stairwell and makes his way to -
- the first room on his left, where the door is already open - and as he enters the room he asks "Is everything okay?", a reworking of the dialogue in the script, as Todd comes into view lying asleep in his bed and we see another deputy sitting in a chair by Todd's bed -
- and after the second deputy nods in the affirmative, the first deputy nods to him and turns to -
- make his way out.
The end. No going to the room being used as the Sheriff's base of operations.