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Current Talk '24 I / Re: And Now The Return of Another New Slideshow (Sort of), Part 2 [**Now featuring alternate versions of scenes - see replies #18,#21,#23,#49,#64,#69,#76,#88,#90,#100,#105,#107,#115**]
« on: April 11, 2017, 08:12:00 PM »
Once again DC's script contains two versions of what we're about to discuss.
The first version:
And the second version:
The second version is used for Sunday's quote -
- and Monday's quote -
- as well as in the film.
And when it comes to the dialogue, Roger actually says "I remember she gave him the Old House too", dropping "reading" - and the only thing different about Barnabas' lines is that the first sentence is delivered as "I look forward to seeing it" - and Liz actually says "I'm afraid it's in shocking condition. We haven't kept it up" (and it's rather odd how whoever typed Liz' line in the 4/14 revision was apparently ignorant of how to use any sort of punctuation other than a period) - and while Roger says his next line as scripted, he prefaces it by saying "Oh", but he says the second line of that section exactly as scripted.
And as I alluded to last time around, after Liz turns her back to her, Carolyn doesn't begin to fasten the necklace around Liz neck until Roger brings up -
- how Naomi gave the "first" Barnabas the Old House - and Carolyn doesn't come around to check the necklace until Liz admits -
- that they haven't kept up the Old House.
The first version:
ROGER We understood the Old House belonged to him too. BARNABAS I'm most anxious to see it. The first Barnabas wrote a fascinating description of it ... years later. He loved that house so ... ROGER We must take you through it. |
And the second version:
ROGER I remember reading she gave him the Old House too. BARNABAS I'm so looking forward to seeing it. The first Barnabas wrote a fascinating memoir about his life there. I've always dreamed of living in that house. LIZ It's in shocking condition we've not kept it up I'm afraid. ROGER With work it could be made livable again. Why don't we take you though it? |
The second version is used for Sunday's quote -
Page 31(A)/Scene 86 - Roger: 'I remember reading she gave him the Old House too.'
- and Monday's quote -
Page 31(A)/Scene 86 - Barnabas: 'I'm so looking forward to seeing it. The first Barnabas wrote a fascinating memoir about his life there. I've always dreamed of living in that house.'
- as well as in the film.
And when it comes to the dialogue, Roger actually says "I remember she gave him the Old House too", dropping "reading" - and the only thing different about Barnabas' lines is that the first sentence is delivered as "I look forward to seeing it" - and Liz actually says "I'm afraid it's in shocking condition. We haven't kept it up" (and it's rather odd how whoever typed Liz' line in the 4/14 revision was apparently ignorant of how to use any sort of punctuation other than a period) - and while Roger says his next line as scripted, he prefaces it by saying "Oh", but he says the second line of that section exactly as scripted.
And as I alluded to last time around, after Liz turns her back to her, Carolyn doesn't begin to fasten the necklace around Liz neck until Roger brings up -
- how Naomi gave the "first" Barnabas the Old House - and Carolyn doesn't come around to check the necklace until Liz admits -
- that they haven't kept up the Old House.