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« on: February 03, 2017, 09:10:55 PM »
And here's the original draft's version of the above, as well as one more scene, of which we'll see makes up for the added scene in the original rewrite because that rewrite sort of has a bit of the upcoming second scene here and the original rewrite's "added" scene (of which now I can say without confusing the hell out of everyone is really just the moving and reworking of an already existing scene in the original draft):
And that will be it for the original draft for a while because DC's version of the script will next be dealing with the March 25th's rewrites of some of Scenes 45 through 51 (though not in the order they appear in what I shared) and his version of the script won't meet up to what's coming up next in the original draft until DC's script reaches its Scene 54D, which, as far as the slideshow is concerned, is two script pages, 11 quotes, and 9 days from now...
53 INT. OLD HOUSE BEDROOM - NIGHT 53 Maggie is by the window with the candle. She hears the MUFFLED THUD OF A DOOR SLAMMING. She goes to the door. She hears a SECOND DOOR SLAM. NEARER NOW. MAGGIE All right, David! That's enough. Let me out of here. David! 54 INT. FOYER - COLLINWOOD - NIGHT 54 GROUP SHOT - JEFF, LIZ, CAROLYN, TODD and MRS. JOHNSON JEFF How could you let Maggie go out alone on a night like this!? The main door opens. DAVID stands there. DAVID I've come back! |
And that will be it for the original draft for a while because DC's version of the script will next be dealing with the March 25th's rewrites of some of Scenes 45 through 51 (though not in the order they appear in what I shared) and his version of the script won't meet up to what's coming up next in the original draft until DC's script reaches its Scene 54D, which, as far as the slideshow is concerned, is two script pages, 11 quotes, and 9 days from now...