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Current Talk '24 I / Re: And Even Yet Another New Slideshow
« on: April 28, 2014, 12:22:56 AM »
I posted last night off the top of my head without referring to my notes and got several things wrong. That will teach me not to check my notes before posting. But things have been corrected now, so you may want to look over the previous post again.
But as for dealing with today's quote, even though the script goes on with -
Kelly pulls one of the Collins letters from her jacket and shines her light on it, revealing the same design.
- and at that point today's quote -
- appears in the script, it's completely dropped in the pilot and there is no reference at all in the pilot to the three graces. So, Kelly does not refer to the letter at this point as that also comes up in a later scene. And the script's explanation that -
Excited, Willie throws his shoulder against the mausoleum's iron door. With a SCREEEE of rusted metal, it swings back.
- also does not take place. In the pilot Willie and Kelly simply find the mausoleum and enter. End of scene.
Now, the pilot sets up the next scene as -
INT. MAUSOLEUM - COLLINWOOD - NIGHT
Willie enters, Kelly with him, flashlights revealing elegant stone carvings. Ahead, STONE STAIRS lead down to a crypt. Flashlights flickering, Willie and Kelly descend into...
- and that's it. However, in the pilot Willie carries on even more with his unscripted scary moans as they descend the stairs. It's during their descent that Kelly angrily delivers an unscripted "Stop it. You're annoying me." And even though Willie apologizes by saying "I'm sorry. I'm scared." - also unscripted - nothing could be further from the truth because he continues his antics, even going so far as to offer an unscripted knock-knock joke:
Willie: 'Knock knock.'
Kelly: (reluctantly) 'Who's there?'
Willie: 'Hopefully no one.'
And that finally begins to get through to Kelly to lighten the mood. So, despite the fact that she then says the unscripted "Will you stop it. Seriously." she says it with a laugh to her voice and then they both laugh.
Now, that all leads to the next scene, which the script describes with:
INT. INNER CRYPT - MAUSOLEUM - NIGHT
The room is four walls of rock, hand-hewn and rough. Willie shines his light around the room, spotting a decorative
CARVED STONE LION'S HEAD
on one wall.
And it's soon after that point that we get to the new placement of yesterday's quote - though Willie only says "Didn't I see that in one of your letters?" referring to the lion's head and obviously not the three graces on the outside of the mausoleum.
But as for dealing with today's quote, even though the script goes on with -
Kelly pulls one of the Collins letters from her jacket and shines her light on it, revealing the same design.
- and at that point today's quote -
Page 18 - Kelly: '"Three graces spin high above..."'
- appears in the script, it's completely dropped in the pilot and there is no reference at all in the pilot to the three graces. So, Kelly does not refer to the letter at this point as that also comes up in a later scene. And the script's explanation that -
Excited, Willie throws his shoulder against the mausoleum's iron door. With a SCREEEE of rusted metal, it swings back.
- also does not take place. In the pilot Willie and Kelly simply find the mausoleum and enter. End of scene.
Now, the pilot sets up the next scene as -
INT. MAUSOLEUM - COLLINWOOD - NIGHT
Willie enters, Kelly with him, flashlights revealing elegant stone carvings. Ahead, STONE STAIRS lead down to a crypt. Flashlights flickering, Willie and Kelly descend into...
- and that's it. However, in the pilot Willie carries on even more with his unscripted scary moans as they descend the stairs. It's during their descent that Kelly angrily delivers an unscripted "Stop it. You're annoying me." And even though Willie apologizes by saying "I'm sorry. I'm scared." - also unscripted - nothing could be further from the truth because he continues his antics, even going so far as to offer an unscripted knock-knock joke:
Willie: 'Knock knock.'
Kelly: (reluctantly) 'Who's there?'
Willie: 'Hopefully no one.'
And that finally begins to get through to Kelly to lighten the mood. So, despite the fact that she then says the unscripted "Will you stop it. Seriously." she says it with a laugh to her voice and then they both laugh.
Now, that all leads to the next scene, which the script describes with:
INT. INNER CRYPT - MAUSOLEUM - NIGHT
The room is four walls of rock, hand-hewn and rough. Willie shines his light around the room, spotting a decorative
CARVED STONE LION'S HEAD
on one wall.
And it's soon after that point that we get to the new placement of yesterday's quote - though Willie only says "Didn't I see that in one of your letters?" referring to the lion's head and obviously not the three graces on the outside of the mausoleum.