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Current Talk '24 I / Re: And Now The Return of Another New Slideshow (Sort of), Part 2 [**Now featuring alternate versions of scenes - see replies #18,#21,#23,#49,#64,#69,#76,#88,#90,#100,#105,#107,#115**]
« on: August 12, 2017, 07:34:10 PM »
Wrapping up Scene 146 as it appears in DC's script, beginning and ending with today's quote -
- coming up.
End of scene.
And when it comes to the dialogue, DC added the notation "x Back looking out window" before the sheriff starts his line, and as we can see in today's capture, the sheriff is closer to -
the window than he's been thus far - and the sheriff delivers his line almost exactly as scripted with the exception that he prefaces the first phrase with the word "No", as in "No, don't worry, Eliot" - and after the sheriff's answer, Stokes reaches over to pat the black bag -
- that has mysteriously been sitting on the table, though there's no indication of him doing so as an added notation, so presumably it's being done because Stokes didn't do it when his first lines in the scene were dropped and within them there was an indication in the script that read: "(indicating a small black leather bag)" and following that with the line "And when she does we'll be ready for her" - and while the audience can certainly suspect what's in the bag, there's nothing to confirm any suspicion, but it's definitely clear that whatever it is inside is important - and after Stokes pats the bag, the sheriff turns his gaze from Stokes to the bag -
- to further confirm the bag's content's importance.
Page 67/Scene 146 - Sheriff: 'Don't worry, Eliot -- the men know that the cross will give them all the protection they need.'
- coming up.
End of scene.
And when it comes to the dialogue, DC added the notation "x Back looking out window" before the sheriff starts his line, and as we can see in today's capture, the sheriff is closer to -
the window than he's been thus far - and the sheriff delivers his line almost exactly as scripted with the exception that he prefaces the first phrase with the word "No", as in "No, don't worry, Eliot" - and after the sheriff's answer, Stokes reaches over to pat the black bag -
- that has mysteriously been sitting on the table, though there's no indication of him doing so as an added notation, so presumably it's being done because Stokes didn't do it when his first lines in the scene were dropped and within them there was an indication in the script that read: "(indicating a small black leather bag)" and following that with the line "And when she does we'll be ready for her" - and while the audience can certainly suspect what's in the bag, there's nothing to confirm any suspicion, but it's definitely clear that whatever it is inside is important - and after Stokes pats the bag, the sheriff turns his gaze from Stokes to the bag -
- to further confirm the bag's content's importance.