Revisiting how Scenes 36 through 39 appear in DC's script:
Moving on to Scene 36 and beyond within the sequence:
36 QUENTIN - CLOSE-UP (NORMAL COLOR) - 1971 36
Oblivious to Tracy, he stares out the window.
TRACY (O.S.) Quentin?
37 EXT - GROUNDS - 1971 - QUENTIN'S P.O.V. - 37 NORMAL COLOR
It is back to normal again - no fog, no body in the tree.
38 TRACY - MEDIUM ANGLE 38
PAN WITH HER as she crosses to Quentin.
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And that's when today's quote -
Page 13/Scene 38 - Tracy: 'Darling, what's wrong? What are you thinking about?'
- comes up.
And it's still the case that there aren't any differences between the way DC's and Grayson Hall's scripts are written up to this point - and there also aren't any notations in either script for what's covered in this post.
But so far any differences in the dialogue go, Tracy's off screen dialogue in Scene 36 is moved to Scene 37 - and at the outset of Scene 38 she asks an unscripted "Darling, what's the matter?" on screen before actually crossing over from behind Quentin to deliver the quoted dialogue exactly as written.
And so far as the directions and descriptions go, the only things that are different in the film is that Quentin actually does some unscripted blinking of his eyes in Scene 36 before we see in Scene 37 that things are back to normal - and ... we don't pan with Tracy after she asks Quentin what's the matter because after that we immediately see Quentin and Tracy actually comes to him from behind him.
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And so far as "today's quote" goes, it was September 2nd this time around.
Continuing with Scene 38 and up to the end of the sequence:
Suddenly, Quentin realizes she is next to him.
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And that's when yesterday's quote -
Page 13/Scene 38 - Quentin: 'What? (turns to her) Oh, I don't know. Just ... daydreaming I guess.'
- comes up, followed by the script continuing with:
He frowns as they both look out the window.
TRACY It's so beautiful.
39 HIGH ANGLE 39
as Carlotta ENTERS with the tray. Tracy crosses to the table, Quentin still stands at the window.
QUENTIN - CLOSE-UP
He is still trying to understand what it was he saw.
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And that's when today's quote -
Page 13/Scene 39 - Tracy (O.S.): 'Come on, darling ... it looks delicious.'
- comes up.
End of scene and sequence.
And it's still the case that there aren't any differences between the way DC's and Grayson Hall's scripts are written up to this point, however, there are notations in both scripts that we'll get into below...
And so far any differences in the dialogue go, ... - and while Carlotta's return to the room doesn't actually take place in the film as it currently stands, Grayson Hall has a notation in her script that when Carlotta returns she says "I brought some white wine. I hope you like it", and what's very interesting about that is that unlike in any other version of NoDS, in the one that's available on Amazon, during Quentin's final close-up we actually do hear Carlotta say "I brought some" before she gets cut off by the effect of the film moving to Scene 40 - and ... Tracy's quoted off screen line also does not appear in the film as it currently stands (however, all of this missing stuff is part of the recovered footage).
And so far as the directions and descriptions go, as I've already pretty much noted, we don't see Carlotta enter with the tray or Tracy cross to the table because all that remains in the film from Scene 39 is Quentin's close-up. And speaking of that close-up, DC has a notation in his script that Quentin's close-up is "full face", which I suppose is the way it appears to be. And getting back to Grayson's script, she has a notation that Carlotta should start to serve, and the notation does go on a bit from there, but, unfortunately, it's hard to decipher all of her handwriting, so we'll leave it at that.
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Actually, what Grayson wrote is "I should start to serve - I stop her with a look that she's useless" - whoa, already from day one could Carlotta be less impressed with Tracy or what?!
And so far as "yesterday's quote" goes, it was September 3rd this time around, and "today's quote" was September 4th.
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