Revisiting how Scene 33 is scripted:
Setting up Scene 33:
33 INT - GALLERY - DAY 33
QUENTIN - TRACY - CARLOTTA
as Quentin examines the various portraits.
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and that's when today's quote -
Page 11/Scene 33 - Quentin: 'I have a terrible feeling my ancestors would never have bought my work.'
comes up.
And as for any differences in Quentin's dialogue, upon entering the Gallery he delivers an unscripted "It's quite a collection" - and what he actually does rather than say what's quoted is he lightly chuckles and then says "I've got a feeling my ancestors wouldn't have bought my work."
And as can be seen in this capture -
- when we first see them in the Gallery and Quentin remarks that the paintings are quite a collection, things are shot from the opposite angle that the entire rest of the scene is. But then, as we'll see, there are no angles specified in the script for Scene 33...
And there are still no differences between the way DC's and Grayson Hall's scripts are written up to this point.
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And so far as "today's quote" goes, it was August 25th this time around.
Continuing with Scene 33 with today's quote:
Page 11/Scene 33 - Tracy (at the window): 'His paintings are very abstract.'
And as for any differences there, Tracy actually says "Quentin's paintings are very abstract."
And as can be seen in today's capture -
- Tracy isn't standing near any of the windows in the Gallery.
And it's still the case that there aren't any differences between the way DC's and Grayson Hall's scripts are written up to this point.
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And as far as "today's quote" goes, it was August 26th this time around.
And continuing with Scene 33 with today's quote:
Page 11/Scene 33 - Carlotta: 'How interesting.'
And as for any differences in the dialogue, at first Carlotta actually delivers her response by adding an unscripted "You're a painter" before she says "How interesting." And obviously to anyone who's already seen the film, there's all sorts of subtext there, helped along by the sly hint of a smile on Carlotta's face as she says it -
- but, again, no viewer seeing the film for the first time would really pick up on it to the point of understanding what's really going on with Carlotta.
And it's still the case that there aren't any differences between the way DC's and Grayson Hall's scripts are written up to this point. Though it's interesting that rather than add, "You're a painter," to her script, Grayson added Carlotta's remark as "Oh you paint?". Even more interesting is that DC hasn't added any of the unscripted lines to his script, but he will add some of them when it comes to some future scenes...
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And as far as "today's quote" goes, it was August 27th this time around.
And more of Scene 33:
He is at the portrait of Angelique.
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And that's when yesterday's quote -
Page 11/Scene 33 - Quentin: 'Is this one of the family?'
- comes up, followed by today's quote -
Page 11/Scene 33 - Carlotta: 'That's Angelique Collins. She died in 1810.'
- coming up, followed by the script continuing with:
TRACY She's beautiful.
Quentin stares at it. ...
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And it's still the case that there aren't any differences between the way DC's and Grayson Hall's scripts are written up to this point. However, both DC's and Grayson's scripts have some notations that we'll get into below.
And as for any differences in the dialogue, the first notation in DC's script has the word "this" crossed out in Quentin's dialogue and replaces it with "that", but neither word is used in the film because what Quentin actually asks is "Is she one of the family?" - and another dialogue notation in DC's as well as in Grayson's script is adding "Yes, it is" to Carlotta's dialogue, though what Carlotta actually says is "Yes, she is. She's Angelique Collins", and I love how she spells the year out completely by saying "She died in Eighteen Hundred and Ten" - and what Tracy actually says is "Well, she's beautiful, isn't she?"
And so far as any differences in the directions and descriptions go, Quentin isn't actually at the portrait of Angelique before he asks if she's one of the family because he smiles, nods toward it, and begins walking toward it just before he asks - and DC's script has a notation that Quentin is next to it when he asks, but in the film we don't actually see Quentin when he asks because he's off screen with, as can be seen in yesterday's capture -
- a shot of only the portrait on screen - and similarly, even though DC has a notation that Carlotta will be shot in close-up while she explains about the portrait, as can be seen in today's capture -
- what's on screen is a tight shot of Angelique's face in the portrait - and DC's script also has a notation that after Carlotta indicates the woman in the portrait is a member of the family, Carlotta will hold the rest of her lines until Quentin gets to the portrait - but while there is a slight pause in the way Carlotta delivers her lines, given that it's only the portrait that's seen on screen, we obviously have no idea if Quentin is at the portrait or not - and Grayson's script has a notation about the locket Carlotta is wearing, and as can be seen in the following capture (which is cropped and enlarged from the actual moment on screen) -
- Carlotta is indeed toying with it (though no one has yet to know the significance of that act) - and Grayson's script also has a notation that Carlotta is "enjoying" Quentin and Tracy's reactions to the portrait, and as can also be seen in the above capture, that's certainly the case (but again, with no one yet knowing the significance of that (nor the significance of the vase of yellow daffodils under the portrait)) - and DC's last notation on this bit of the script says that Tracy crosses to the portrait, however, she doesn't actually because, as can also be seen in the above capture, she's simply turned to look at it while standing in the same spot in the room that she's been in since Scene 33 started.
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And so far as "yesterday's quote" goes, it was August 28th this time around, and "today's quote" was August 29th.
And yet more of Scene 33, picking up where we left Quentin staring at Angelique's portrait:
Quentin stares at it. Tracy moves to the window.
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And that's when today's quote -
Page 11/Scene 33 - Tracy: 'Every room I've been in, I've kept thinking - oh, this is where I'll spend most of my time. But this is it! The view's incredible.'
- comes up, followed by the script continuing with:
CARLOTTA I've prepared a salad for supper. Shall I serve it here?
33 CONTD CONTD 33
TRACY Oh, yes - would you?
Quentin stares at it. ...
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And yes, while it's still the case that there aren't any differences between the way DC's and Grayson Hall's scripts are written up to this point, both DC's and Grayson's scripts have some notations that we'll get into below.
And as for any differences in the dialogue, rather than today's quote, what Tracy actually says is "Carlotta, I think this is my favorite room. The view is really incredible" - and the notation in Grayson's script is that she crosses out the word "supper" in Carlotta's dialogue and replaces it with "dinner," as in "I've prepared a salad for dinner" - and after Carlotta asks if Tracy would like the salad served there, Tracy actually replies with "Uh...well, yes - would you?" However, unlike the way they're scripted, part of Tracy's remark about the Gallery being her favorite room and all of Carlotta's references to the salad and Tracy's response about it are all delivered off screen - but more on that below...
And so far as any differences in the directions and descriptions go, DC's script has a notation that Tracy's lines about the Gallery being her favorite room begin "on the cross," and while that's technically true, in the film she doesn't actually cross to any window because what she does do, as can be seen in today's capture -
- is cross to a nearby table, pick up a book (perhaps she's on a similar wavelength to what KMR wants to do in the room
), and delivers her lines - however, the "The view is really incredible" part of it is delivered off screen because, as we can see in the following capture, what we actually see on screen is that the camera trucks in on -

- an extreme close-up of Quentin as he stares at Angelique's portrait as if mesmerized by it (the view that's captured him is obviously not the one outside
) - and what's interesting about the shot of Quentin remaining on screen for the duration of everything else that follows in the parts of the Scene 33 that are covered in this post, DC's script actually contains a notation that Tracy is supposed to turn from the window to Carlotta and then cross to the table as she answers Carlotta regarding serving the salad, but obviously none of that is seen on screen, plus the last we see Tracy before Quentin's close-up, she's already standing at the table (and as we'll see from a capture for the next post, she'll still be standing there).
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And so far as "today's quote" goes, it was August 30th this time around.
And concluding Scene 33 ...
Carlotta smiles and nods. She EXITS as Quentin crosses to the window where he stands for a moment looking out at the sunset.
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And that's when today's quote -
Page 12/Scene 33 - Quentin: 'You know...I have a felling that I'll do better work here than I've ever done before...look at the color of that sunset!'
- comes up...
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And yes, while it's still the case that there aren't any differences between the way DC's and Grayson Hall's scripts are written up to this point, once again DC's script has a notation that we'll get into below.
But so far any differences in the dialogue go, after Carlotta leaves and the camera is back to being on Quentin as he walks to look out the window, in a bit of off screen unscripted dialogue Tracy muses "That's our housekeeper. She makes me feel like she invited us here" (she's obviously already picking up vibes from Carlotta) - and then she adds "It's beautiful, isn't it", which may have been scripted for later in the sequence, but more on that after we get to that section of the script - and what Quentin actually says is "I got a feeling I'm gonna do better work here than I've ever done before in my life", with no reference to a sunset, but why that is will become obvious below.
And so far as any differences in the directions and descriptions go, we don't see Carlotta smile or nod at Tracy before she leaves the room to get the salad, but as can be seen in the following capture -
- Carlotta does give a look in Quentin's direction before she leaves (because, after all, for Carlotta the scene is all about Quentin) and she gives a little smile to herself as she turns to leave, no doubt because as she leaves the camera pans back to Quentin to show that he's still looking at Angelique's portrait - and even though DC's script has a notation that indicates that as Quentin is starting to look out the window at the sunset, Tracy is supposed to reach the table and to start to leaf through a book, that is never seen here because 1) the camera remains on Quentin throughout that portion of Scene 33, and 2) and more importantly, last time we got into that she already did much of that as she told Carlotta how much she liked the Gallery ...
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And so far as "today's quote" goes, it was August 31st this time around.
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