Looking forward to any other thoughts you have about this or differences revealed from your notes.
I think it's odd that David pranking Vicki comes in the YouTube version before Carolyn warns Vicki about David. I suspect most of us would agree that the original timeline of warning followed by pranking would seem to make more sense. And, in fact that's also the intended timeline in the script.
I also meant to mention that I checked and Willie listening to the truck's radio is in the script even though it wasn't in the Fest's version of the pilot that I saw...
Is your source from the '05 Fest?
When I watched what was on YT I thought HUH? I did not remember how it went on the audio but it seemed odd to me that Vicky awoke from a dream and met Carolyn, who was going out. This is Collinsport not NYC. She did meet Joe instead of going to the Blue Whale, but why so late? Now it makes more sense.
He (or they) is a fairly well known fan. I don't think it would be proper to further identify in a public forum for obvious reasons.