Wrapping up DC's script's Scene 20:
MAGGIE - WILLIE - TWO SHOT
MAGGIE Mr. Collins! PAN with SHOT WIDENS as Willie starts slowly, walks past Roger, looking at him with contempt.
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And that's when today's first quote -
Page 8/Scene 20 - Willie: 'All right -- I'll pick up my pay in the morning.’'
- comes up, followed in the script by:
He continues to just outside the door.
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And that's when today's first quote -
Page 8/Scene 20 - Willie: 'But I'll pick up a lot more, too, before then.'
- comes up.
End of scene - though not the end of the sequence as scripted. But more on that starting tomorrow...
And as far as any difference in the dialogue goes, Maggie actually says "Oh, Mr. Collins, he..." before she's cut off by Willie's first response to Roger, which is actually delivered as "(snickers) All right -- I'll pick up my pay in the morning. (snickers)", and then Willie actually follows up with "But I'll get a lot more than that, too, before then."
And as far as the directions and descriptions go, there is no two shot of Maggie and Willie, as DC added to his script, because first there's a close-up of Willie -
- and then there's a three shot of Maggie, Roger and Willie as -
- Willie begins to move toward Roger, though unlike what DC added to his script, the camera does not pan but remains stationary - and as we can see in today's first capture -
- Willie actually stands right up to Roger as he delivers the first part of his response before he moves on to just outside the door and turns, as we can see in the second of today's captures -
- to deliver the second part.