Picking up where we left off with Scene 85, with yesterday's quote, Charles' reply to Gabriel -
Page 35A/Scene 85 - Charles: 'What's happened? You've suddenly become a man. (turning to Angelique) Will you take the credit, my dear?'
- coming up, followed by the script explaining:
She laughs as Gabriel takes the opportunity to force his way in. Before Charles knows what's happening, Strack and FOUR OTHER MEN are coming through the door.
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Angelique rises in alarm as Charles tries to force them back. Two of the men subdue him.
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And that's when today's quote -
Page 36/Scene 85 - Charles: 'Leave her alone, Trask! I'm warning you! Gabriel, have you lost your mind?'
- comes up.
And as for what's different about the dialogue, what Charles actually first says to Gabriel is "Well, little brother's suddenly become a man. (turning to Angelique) Will you take the credit for that, my dear?" - and the reason I selected two captures for today's quote and repeated the entire quote for both is because 1) I couldn't decide which capture I liked best to represent it, but more importantly because 2) in the film what Charles is scripted to say is actually flipped around with him first saying (to Gabriel) -
Charles: 'Have you lost your mind?' - and then (to Strack) -
Charles: 'You touch her and I'll kill you!' - rather than substituting Strack for Trask and saying "Leave her alone, Strack! I'm warning you!"
And the only reason DC's script's Page 35A is indicated as being a part of the 3/31 rewrite is because, as you may have noticed, his script says "Before Charles knows what's happening, Strack and FOUR OTHER MEN are coming through the door", whereas Grayson's script's Page 35 says "Before Charles knows what's happening, Trask and FOUR OTHER MEN are coming through the door."
And once again, one good thing about the VHS version of the film is that it doesn't cut off a character's head, in this case, Strack's:
And as for what's different from the descriptions and directions, Angelique doesn't laugh at Charles' remark about Gabriel suddenly becoming a man - and it's only two other men that enter with Strack, not four - and we don't actually see Angelique rise because when we see her she's already standing in alarm - and before we even see Strack and the second man, as can be seen in today's first capture, it's actually one of the men and Gabriel who subdue Charles.