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DS LABYRINTH Ch. 12. This gives me THE WILLIES!
« on: August 02, 2002, 07:34:41 AM »
Thar she blows! (Okay, well maybe not). Chapter 12 of DARK SHADOWS: THE LABYRINTH OF SOULS has now been posted for your bathroom reading pleasure.

Connie, I'm trying to restrain myself for your sake. Really, I am.

NEW! Chapter 12: http://home.triad.rr.com/smrainey/labyrinth12.htm

Chapter 11: http://home.triad.rr.com/smrainey/labyrinth11.htm

Chapter 10: http://home.triad.rr.com/smrainey/labyrinth10.htm

I hope you folks are continuing to enjoy this. It's a blast to write, though I may need to interrupt it with some honest-to-god paying work this week. But never fear, there's more to come....

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Re: DS LABYRINTH Ch. 12. This gives me THE WILLIES!
« Reply #1 on: August 02, 2002, 08:04:10 AM »
What a great chapter!  Very exciting and mysterious.  Wonderful writing (enviable, I say, enviable).

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Re: DS LABYRINTH Ch. 12. This gives me THE WILLIES!
« Reply #2 on: August 02, 2002, 08:19:33 AM »
Great chapter Mark!
It's fun to see those three at work again!

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Re: DS LABYRINTH Ch. 12. This gives me THE WILLIES!
« Reply #3 on: August 02, 2002, 09:50:23 PM »
:D  Wonderful, as always!!  Thanks......made my whole day.


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Re: DS LABYRINTH Ch. 12. This gives me THE WILLIES!
« Reply #4 on: August 02, 2002, 10:07:55 PM »
I'm still NOT reading it (save for the first three chapters).  I just keep printing off the chapters, ka-chunk them with a three-hole punch, and put them in a binder until the entire wonderful story is complete.  Then the reading adventure begins!

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Re: DS LABYRINTH Ch. 12. This gives me THE WILLIES!
« Reply #5 on: August 03, 2002, 12:56:29 AM »
Glad to see that Willie made an appearance ;) Thank you!

That Dr. Karswell must have a hidden transporter to beam Carolyn out and about the countryside.

I'm beginning to wonder about Mathis--could he also be someone from the Collins past?  
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Re: DS LABYRINTH Ch. 12. This gives me THE WILLIES!
« Reply #6 on: August 03, 2002, 03:29:30 AM »
Mark,

Thanks for sharing your story.  I finally got through to post.  This is really good.

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Re: DS LABYRINTH Ch. 12. This gives me THE WILLIES!
« Reply #7 on: August 03, 2002, 11:26:11 AM »
Hey, I just loved this Mark!! It keeps getting better & better each time!!  :)
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Re: DS LABYRINTH Ch. 12. This gives me THE WILLIES!
« Reply #8 on: August 03, 2002, 12:54:24 PM »
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Connie, I'm trying to restrain myself for your sake. Really, I am.

ROFL!  Well, THANK you.  I appreciate it!!

Loved the chapter.  It was just so nice, I read it twice!  (Actually...thrice)
Can't get enough of this story.  Liked having Willie show up too.

By the way, in an effort to keep Quentin alive and kicking, and for my own peace of mind, I've added another montage to the Demented Montage thread.  Hope it receives due consideration.

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Re: DS LABYRINTH Ch. 12. This gives me THE WILLIES!
« Reply #9 on: August 03, 2002, 05:15:35 PM »
Very good chapter Mark!

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Re: DS LABYRINTH Ch. 12. This gives me THE WILLIES!
« Reply #10 on: August 04, 2002, 03:16:56 AM »
Oooo creepy! Dr. Karswell sounds rather eeeeevil and creepy himself! [vryevl] Mathis and Julia cracked me up. "Did you touch her with your bare hands?" LMAO!!! "If you are concerned about impropriety, Dr. Hoffman, I can assure you...." Soo funnie! I wanna know how Mathis just appeared and disappeared like that. Poor Willie MUST think he's crazy. LOL It's nice 2 c will there again ^.^ And pleeeeease don't kill of Quentin [nerv] Another wonderful chaper! As always,

WRITE MORE!!!!!!

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Re: DS LABYRINTH Ch. 12. This gives me THE WILLIES!
« Reply #11 on: August 04, 2002, 09:20:30 AM »
I didn't get a chance to respond to 11 or read this at first, but earlier tonight I finally got to this one.  Both are sensational!!  Such amazing and different types of things happening.  Sooooo exciting.  :)
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Re: DS LABYRINTH Ch. 12. This gives me THE WILLIES!
« Reply #12 on: August 05, 2002, 05:51:42 AM »
I am enjoying this story very much! I  hope when this is all over and things have returned to normal (well at least for the Collins') no one mentions Carolyn's nudist :o activities, that, I am sure she would no doubt wish remained forgotten. :)
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Re: DS LABYRINTH Ch. 12. This gives me THE WILLIES!
« Reply #13 on: August 05, 2002, 06:20:22 AM »
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I am enjoying this story very much! I  hope when this is all over and things have returned to normal (well at least for the Collins') no one mentions Carolyn's nudist  activities, that, I am sure she would no doubt wish remained forgotten.

And I should not want to be the character to remind her if I didn't want to get whomped pretty good. ;)

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