Here's one I haven't seen anyone mention yet. In 1840 [spoiler]we're told by Gerard about how Tad and Quentin both perished during a storm at sea. Remembering off the top of my head, I recall there's a storm, strong enough to endanger the ship, with high waves. First one then the other goes overboard (I forget the order).
THEN Quentin walks in, saying that they were swept overboard, and the two of them together made their way to land,where they slowly worked their way back to where they could get passage.
Run that one by me again -- the storm is violent enough to endanger a large clipper ship, but two people can find each other in the middle of an ocean and swim to shore.
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Oh, and I'm also the friend whom Angeliquewins mentions downtopic mentioned [spoiler]the Beth off the cliff thing. To elaborate, its not so much THAT she went over,but how they set it up to happen. Sudden mindswitch back, OK, I can buy that. Him coming toward her, seeing she is scared to pieces of him. Now I can see anyone that hysterical not registering that they've backed toward the cliff, not the solid ground on either side. But HE sees her at the edge, and doesn't stop and calm her down, but keeps coming. And LOL the way they have her duck under his arm, its like they're doing a spin in a waltz. Think
Last Crusade and Henry grabbing Indy -- if Q had grabbed her and thrown his weight backward they'd have fallen BACKWARD not forward and over the edge.[/spoiler]
The third is the lack of motivation with the Amanda Harris thing. You have to work really hard to justfy from what you see that they ARE madly in love. Its all tell, with very little in the way of scenes to show it in action.
Jeannie