LOL! With reactions like that, who could refuse?
LOL and cutting rug.....isn't that like actual dancing? like not slow dancing? oh well. WRITE MORE!!!!!
Yeah, "cutting a rug" would refer to a more spirited dancing, but with "Pennsylvania 6-5000," you'd probably have a bit more momentum going than with "Stardust."
Just started Chapter 8, so it'll be around in a few days.
Bear in mind, of course, that all of these are just first drafts (and probably final, for that matter). But since I don't have a highly paid, professional editor checking behind me, should someone's copy-editing instincts suddenly get stirred up by any errors, feel free to email me. I already discovered a slight gaffe, in that in Chapter 1, Julia's room is on the second floor, and later it's on the third. I've corrected the draft so that both are consistent (and on the third floor).
Back to work...