A bit more of Scene 80, beginning with Carlotta's reply to Quentin's claim to having seen a little girl in the window:
CARLOTTA Little girl?
Quentin crosses to the window and looks out.
QUENTIN I was outside --
CARLOTTA I know.
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And that's when today's quote -
Page 30A/Scene 80 - Carlotta: 'I saw you from the window.'
- comes up.
And when it comes to what's different with the dialogue, Carlotta actually questions with "A little girl?" - and Quentin actually replies with "Yes, I was outside --" - to which Carlotta begins to respond by saying "Yes, I know."
And when it comes to what's different with the descriptions and directions, while Quentin crosses out of frame toward the window, we don't actually see Quentin look out it because the camera remains on Carlotta and, as can be seen in today's capture -
- actually pushes in on a close-up of her as she looks at Quentin very closely.
And there are notations in both DC's and Grayson's scripts for this section:
DC writes that the camera will stay on Carlotta, which is obviously how it was shot - but he also writes that we will see Quentin's P.O.V. outside when he looks out the window, which is not how it was shot. The two notes would seem to contradict each other, so who knows?
And Grayson writes a notation along the top of the page of her script that Quentin is still something, but the rest gets cut off in the copy of the script that I have (
) - but she also writes that Carlotta will react with great tolerance to what Quentin is telling her.