Setting up the current sequence (which will eventually contain material not in the pilot):
151A INT. COLLINWOOD - UPSTAIRS CORRIDOR - LONG LENS - NIGHT
AND WIDENING WITH Vicki, as she walks up the corridor TOWARD CAMERA. Suddenly, we HEAR the SOUND of WHISPERED CHILDREN'S VOICES, David's and a little girl's:
(CONTINUED)
151A CONTINUED:
|
And that's when Saturday's first quote -
Page 67/Scene 151A - Girl (O.S.): 'But why can't you play with me?'
- comes up, followed by Saturday's second quote -
Page 67/Scene 151A - David (O.S.): ''Cause I'm supposed to be asleep.'
- coming up, followed by the script explaining:
Vicki, frowns, stops in front of David's door, listens.
|
And that's when Sunday's quote -
Page 67/Scene 151A - Girl (O.S.): 'I never have to go to sleep.'
- comes up, followed by Monday's first quote -
Page 67/Scene 151A - David (O.S.): 'Where do you go then?'
- coming up, followed by Monday's second quote -
Page 67/Scene 151A - Girl (O.S.): 'I don't know... I just keep looking...'
- coming up. And that is perhaps one of the saddest lines the "Girl" delivers...
As for differences, there's actually an unscripted nighttime establishing shot of Collinwood, with the sounds of waves and crickets being heard as the camera zooms in on a lit second floor window:
And as for differences in the dialogue, it's basically delivered word for word as written with only the "'Cause" being dropped when David simply says "I'm supposed to be asleep" and the "then" being dropped when he simply asks "Where do you go?"
And as for differences in the script's direction, Vicki takes notice of the voices after David says he's supposed to be asleep, but she doesn't listen at his door until after the "Girl" delivers the "I don't know..." part of her line.