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« on: February 01, 2016, 10:44:46 PM »
Continuing with Scene 38 and up to the end of the sequence:
And that's when yesterday's quote -
- comes up, followed by the script continuing with:
And that's when today's quote -
- comes up.
End of scene and sequence.
And it's still the case that there aren't any differences between the way DC's and Grayson Hall's scripts are written up to this point, however, there are notations in both scripts that we'll get into below...
And so far any differences in the dialogue go, Quentin really only mouths the "What?" part of his lines and what he actually does say is "Nothing ... I was just daydreaming I guess" - and while Tracy sighs at his remark, her line that it's so beautiful is not delivered (though, as I mentioned in reply #34, that could be because she makes a similar remark off screen in Scene 33) - and while Carlotta's return to the room doesn't actually take place in the film as it currently stands, Grayson Hall has a notation in her script that when Carlotta returns she says "I brought some white wine. I hope you like it", and what's very interesting about that is that unlike in any other version of NoDS, in the one that's available on Amazon, during Quentin's final close-up we actually do hear Carlotta say "I brought some" before she gets cut off by the effect of the film moving to Scene 40 - and as is obvious given today's graphic for today's quote, Tracy's quoted off screen line also does not appear in the film as it currently stands (however, all of this missing stuff is part of the recovered footage).
And so far as the directions and descriptions go, as I've already pretty much noted, we don't see Carlotta enter with the tray or Tracy cross to the table because all that remains in the film from Scene 39 is Quentin's close-up. And speaking of that close-up, DC has a notation in his script that Quentin's close-up is "full face", which I suppose is the way it appears to be. And getting back to Grayson's script, she has a notation that Carlotta should start to serve, and the notation does go on a bit from there, but, unfortunately, it's hard to decipher all of her handwriting, so we'll leave it at that.
Suddenly, Quentin realizes she is next to him. |
And that's when yesterday's quote -
Page 13/Scene 38 - Quentin: 'What? (turns to her) Oh, I don't know. Just ... daydreaming I guess.'
- comes up, followed by the script continuing with:
He frowns as they both look out the window. TRACY It's so beautiful. 39 HIGH ANGLE 39 as Carlotta ENTERS with the tray. Tracy crosses to the table, Quentin still stands at the window. QUENTIN - CLOSE-UP He is still trying to understand what it was he saw. |
And that's when today's quote -
Page 13/Scene 39 - Tracy (O.S.): 'Come on, darling ... it looks delicious.'
- comes up.
End of scene and sequence.
And it's still the case that there aren't any differences between the way DC's and Grayson Hall's scripts are written up to this point, however, there are notations in both scripts that we'll get into below...
And so far any differences in the dialogue go, Quentin really only mouths the "What?" part of his lines and what he actually does say is "Nothing ... I was just daydreaming I guess" - and while Tracy sighs at his remark, her line that it's so beautiful is not delivered (though, as I mentioned in reply #34, that could be because she makes a similar remark off screen in Scene 33) - and while Carlotta's return to the room doesn't actually take place in the film as it currently stands, Grayson Hall has a notation in her script that when Carlotta returns she says "I brought some white wine. I hope you like it", and what's very interesting about that is that unlike in any other version of NoDS, in the one that's available on Amazon, during Quentin's final close-up we actually do hear Carlotta say "I brought some" before she gets cut off by the effect of the film moving to Scene 40 - and as is obvious given today's graphic for today's quote, Tracy's quoted off screen line also does not appear in the film as it currently stands (however, all of this missing stuff is part of the recovered footage).
And so far as the directions and descriptions go, as I've already pretty much noted, we don't see Carlotta enter with the tray or Tracy cross to the table because all that remains in the film from Scene 39 is Quentin's close-up. And speaking of that close-up, DC has a notation in his script that Quentin's close-up is "full face", which I suppose is the way it appears to be. And getting back to Grayson's script, she has a notation that Carlotta should start to serve, and the notation does go on a bit from there, but, unfortunately, it's hard to decipher all of her handwriting, so we'll leave it at that.