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« on: August 15, 2017, 11:58:50 PM »
Seven more scenes in DC's script:
And when it comes to the dialogue, the descriptions, and the directions, things are close to the script:
Scene 151 is once again an interior shot as we see the officer who's been identified as Alex and he suddenly points -
- which quickly shifts (with no ad lib heard from the sheriff, despite DC's notation) to Scene 152's shot through the windshield of them seeing Carolyn in the road as Alex shouts an unscripted -
- upon which we do indeed see the driving policeman's foot in Scene 153 on the break and then we see him struggling with the wheel intercut with another image of Carolyn -
- in the road and the car swerving to avoid her, then the shot of the wheels screeching in Scene 154, more of the driver struggling in Scene 155 - and then there is a whip pan until the tree becomes visible in front of the car and the car crashes into it - whereupon things shift to Scene 157 and the sheriff's base of operations as he and Stokes hear the accident, they rush to the windows, and as added to DC's script, the sheriff says -
"Oh my God."
- but obviously not on the radio...
151 EXT: HOOD MOUNT SHOT - NIGHT 151 We see the second officer react to something ahead on the road. He grabs the driver, who gives the wheel a yank. 152 INT: POLICE CAR - THE ROAD AHEAD 152 (SHOOTING THROUGH WINDSHIELD) ad lib line from sheriff on radio SHOT is over the shoulders of the two policemen and FRAMES Carolyn in the beam of their headlights, stand- ing there on the road ahead. The driver wildly tries to avoid her. 153 INSERT SHOT - POLICEMAN'S FOOT ON BREAK 153 154 INSERT SHOT - WHEELS SCREECHING 154 155 The driver is wrestling desperately with the wheel. Whip to windshield (THROUGH WINDSHIELD) Tree suddenly looms up as the car smashes against it. There is a tremendous roar. 157 INT: SHERIFF'S ROOM, COLLINWOOD - NIGHT 157 (rush to the) The ROAR OF THE|CRASH can be heard O.S. Stokes and the Sheriff reflection of the fire. Sheriff is ad libbing on the radio. (oh my god) |
And when it comes to the dialogue, the descriptions, and the directions, things are close to the script:
Scene 151 is once again an interior shot as we see the officer who's been identified as Alex and he suddenly points -
- which quickly shifts (with no ad lib heard from the sheriff, despite DC's notation) to Scene 152's shot through the windshield of them seeing Carolyn in the road as Alex shouts an unscripted -
"Charlie, look out!"
- upon which we do indeed see the driving policeman's foot in Scene 153 on the break and then we see him struggling with the wheel intercut with another image of Carolyn -
- in the road and the car swerving to avoid her, then the shot of the wheels screeching in Scene 154, more of the driver struggling in Scene 155 - and then there is a whip pan until the tree becomes visible in front of the car and the car crashes into it - whereupon things shift to Scene 157 and the sheriff's base of operations as he and Stokes hear the accident, they rush to the windows, and as added to DC's script, the sheriff says -
"Oh my God."
- but obviously not on the radio...