And now the next two scenes in DC's script's March 25th rewrite (and when it comes to the first, we didn't pick any quotes from it):
67 INT. CARD ROOM - NIGHT
SHERIFF'S P.O.V.
Maggie, Jeff and Carolyn sit there drinking coffee.
SHERIFF Feeling any better, Maggie?
MAGGIE A little, Sheriff.
SHERIFF I want to talk to you tomorrow. I'll drop by in the morning.
She nods. Sheriff and Roger continue down the hall.
68 CAROLYN - JEFF - MAGGIE
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And that's when February 26th's quote -
Page 22/Scene 68 - Sheriff's Voice (O.S.) (Moving Down Hallway): 'I've stationed two men on the grounds, Mr. Collins. No point in taking any chances.'
- comes up, followed in the script by:
Jeff comes to the silent, still in shock, Maggie.
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And that's when February 27th's quote -
Page 22/Scene 68 - Jeff: 'Maggie, you've got to stop thinking about it.'
- comes up, followed in the script by:
Rev. 3/25/70
68 CONTD CONTD 68
CAROLYN Yes, Maggie, You must.
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And that's when February 28th's quote -
Page 22A/Scene 68 - Maggie: 'Who could have been at that door? Who?'
- comes up, followed in the script by:
Roger enters X to table ROGER Now there's no need for further post mortem's tonight.
JEFF You may be able to forget this, Mr. Collins. But I certainly won't, and neither will Maggie.
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And when there's a February 29th, that's when its first quote -
Page 22A/Scene 68 - Roger: 'If there was anyone at the old house, he's been frightened away by now.'
- comes up, followed by its second quote
Page 22A/Scene 68 - Jeff (Angrily): 'If there was.'
- coming up, followed in the script by:
MAGGIE Jeff, please. gets up X to the side of table He cools it. She goes to Roger
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And that's when March 1st's first quote -
Page 22A/Scene 68 - Maggie: 'Mr. Collins, we won't discuss tonight. But we should talk about tomorrow. I will have to deal with David then.'
- comes up, though it appears this way in the script:
must david | | v MAGGIE v Mr. Collins, we won't discuss tonight. But we should talk about tomorrow. I will have to deal with David then.
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And that's when March 1st's second quote -
Page 22A/Scene 68 - Roger: 'Miss Evans, I do not blame David. I know he needs discipline. That's why I hired you. You have failed.'
- comes up, though it appears this way in the script:
Miss Evans we all ROGER it's not news that the boy know david needs Mriss Evans, I do not blame David. discipline - that's I know he needs discipline. But why I hired you - obviously That's why I hired you. You have n't you haven't done your job. failed. made a very good job of it
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And the script continues with:
Jeff takes a few steps toward him. He is about to say something. as he bring the Camera to Maggie
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And that's when March 2nd's quote -
Page 22A/Scene 68 - Maggie: 'Then I'll give my notice now, Mr. Collins.'
- comes up, followed in the script by:
Jeff and Carolyn both react.
Rev. 3/25/70
68 CONTD CONTD 68
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And that's when March 3rd's quote -
Page 22B/Scene 68 - Roger: 'I think that's an extremely sensible decision. Good night.'
- comes up, followed in the script by:
CAROLYN Uncle Roger! steps toward Roger
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End of scene - though not the end of the sequence.
And we'll never know if things actually played out as changed because those two scenes are among the many that ended up on the cutting room floor and whose footage was subsequently destroyed...
And yes, any missing punctuation is because that's the way it appears in the script...