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Current Talk '24 I / Re: And Now The Return of Another New Slideshow (Sort of), Part 2 [**Now featuring alternate versions of scenes - see replies #18,#21,#23,#49,#64,#69,#76,#88,#90,#100,#105,#107,#115**]
« on: January 08, 2017, 09:42:02 PM »
But here's how things play in the first draft:
To be picked up tomorrow...
11 INT. CORRIDOR - NIGHT 11 Maggie, still holding the candelabra, runs from the room. SCREAMING. MRS. JOHNSON, a dour woman dressed in the black uniform of a housekeeper, runs from the room next to Maggie's. INTO TIGHT TWO SHOT. MRS. JOHNSON Maggie! What is it? MAGGIE David...David... She points inside her room, unable to say more. Mrs. Johnson looks at her sharply, starts to the room as ROGER comes down the hall. Roger, a stern, proud, impressive- looking man in his forties, is David's father. ROGER My dear Miss Evans, why are you screaming? I find Proust difficult enough to read without -- 11 CONTD CONTD 11 MAGGIE Mr. Collins! It's David -- ELIZABETH STODDARD enters down the hall in the opposite direction from Roger. She is the grande dame of the Collins' family, and Roger's sister. She is still quite beautiful. LIZ What about David, Maggie? |
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