When it comes to the quote for the 16th -
Page 16 - Carolyn: 'That if I don't get away soon, I'll wind up like my mother. Afraid of the world, hiding from every shadow...'
- what Carolyn actually says in the pilot is "Well, for one thing that I'll wind up like my mother. Completely crazy." Joe then has an added bit where he jokes "Too late" - and they both laugh. And that's followed by the quote for the 17th -
Page 16 - Joe: 'Elizabeth's tougher than you think. And trust me, so are you.'
- though in the pilot it's delivered as "Elizabeth is tougher than you think. And believe me, so are you." And they kiss.