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Current Talk '24 I / Re: And Now The Return of Another New Slideshow (Sort of), Part 2 [**Now featuring alternate versions of scenes - see replies #18,#21,#23,#49,#64,#69,#76,#88,#90,#100,#105,#107,#115**]
« on: March 09, 2017, 08:08:26 PM »
Picking up Scene 79 where we left off:
And that's when March 7th's quote -
- comes up, followed in the script by:
And that's when yesterday's quote -
- comes up, followed in the script by:
And that's when today's quote -
- comes up, followed in the script by the rest of that bit of Willie's dialogue:
And as far as what's different about this section of Scene 79 when it comes to the dialogue, the directions and the descriptions, that will wait until another post...
She starts to rise, stops, staring at the corner banquette, as CAMERA TRUCKS TO CLOSE UP. TODD (V.O.) Carolyn, what is it? CAROLYN Willie Loomis! 79 CONTD CONTD 79 SHOT WIDENS. As Todd stands next to her, the CAMERA TRUCKS Keeping them in left frame someone whose back is to them. They cannot tell who it is. But the man's hand holding a cane has a ring on it. The cane has a curious and very distinctive SILVER WOLFHEAD HANDLE. CAROLYN I'm going to speak to him. He never picked up his pay. REVERSE - WIDE ANGLE With Willie in the extreme f.g. he looks up, sees her coming. He mutters something we cannot hear to his companion. Willie rises, moves quickly to Carolyn, meeting her halfway. She still cannot see his com- panion. Willie seems completely different from the last time we saw him. He wears a turtleneck shirt under his coat. WILLIE Miss Carolyn -- |
And that's when March 7th's quote -
Page 26/Scene 79 - Carolyn: 'We've been looking for you, Willie.'
- comes up, followed in the script by:
WILLIE You didn't think about looking here, huh? She shakes her head. He shrugs, at a loss to explain himself. |
And that's when yesterday's quote -
Page 26/Scene 79 - Carolyn: 'Roger has your pay envelope ready.'
- comes up, followed in the script by:
WILLIE Oh. Yeh. I guess he does. Well, I'll get to it. I -- I been busy. I got a new job. He is carefully moving so she cannot see his companion. |
And that's when today's quote -
Page 26/Scene 79 - Willie: 'This -- this opportunity, it came up kind of fast like ... And I took it.'
- comes up, followed in the script by the rest of that bit of Willie's dialogue:
WILLIE Well, nice seeing you Miss Carolyn. See you around. |
And as far as what's different about this section of Scene 79 when it comes to the dialogue, the directions and the descriptions, that will wait until another post...