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« on: February 24, 2016, 02:12:00 AM »
Continuing with Grayson's script's version of the rest of Scene 56 and beyond:
Notice that:
Laura CAMERA PANS to lowly at first, Gabriel grabs her hand, but her laughter grows. She is hysterical. stares at her, in panic, as the child tries to run and stop her, but Mrs. Castle restrains her. Finally, her laughter fades as Strack Strack And so we commend her spirit to a just and forgiving God. Amen. They carry the coffin into the mausoleum. 57 EXT - CEMETERY - 1971 - DAY - NORMAL COLOR 57 The sun is shining again and all is quiet. The CAMERA is shooting from the other side of the deserted cemetery and Quentin can be seen still sitting on his horse on the other side of the trees. START A SLOW ZOOM IN AS HE SHAKES HIS HEAD IN BEWILDERMENT. Finally, he decides to take a closer look. He tries to spur his horse forward but he won't move. All of a sudden, it rears on its hind legs and with a whinny of fear wildly gallops off in the opposite direction as Quentin tried futilely to control him. 58 EXT - ROAD - DAY 58 as the horse and Quentin charge into view The horse moving sideways and out of control, is thundering toward the road. Suddenly, a car 58 CONTD CONTD 58 driven by CLAIRE JENKINS ENTERS THE SHOT just as the horse runs into the road. She slams on her brakes. The horse rears and as they almost collide, Quentin finally regains control. CLAIRE Quentin! |
Notice that:
- Missing from Grayson's script is Strack's "Angelique Collins has departed this life for a far better one - a world without tears or pain."
- Her script refers to Laura as becoming "hysterical," which DC's does not.
- Her script, unlike DC's, also refers to
Trask/Strack staring atSamantha/Laura in a panic as Sarah tries to run and stopSamantha/Laura from laughing. - And in her script there's no reference to
Trask/Strack nodding to the pallbearers, who then pick up the coffin. - And, of course, there's no need in her script for the caretaker to open the gate to the mausoleum because Gabriel has already opened it.