Picking up with Scene 23:
23 EXT - COLLINWOOD PORTICO 23
as the car ENTERS THE SHOT and pulls up in front of the house. Quentin and Tracy both get out and starts to unpack the back seat.
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And that's when Friday's first quote -
Page 7/Scene 23 - Tracy: 'What do you bet I turn into one of those women you see in House & Garden.'
- comes up, followed by Friday's second quote -
Page 7/Scene 23 - Quentin (still busily unpacking): 'I can see it now, Mrs. Quentin Collins in her fashionable jeans at her 18th-century rosewood desk making out the menus for the week.'
- coming up, followed by the script continuing with:
And that's when Saturday's first quote -
Page 7/Scene 23 - Quentin: 'Oh, there is a housekeeper, you know.'
- comes up, followed by Saturday's second quote -
Page 7/Scene 23 - Tracy: 'Oh, great! I bet she looks just like Mrs. Danvers.
- coming up, followed by the script continuing with:
QUENTIN I'm sure she does.
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And that's when Sunday's first quote -
Page 7/Scene 23 - Tracy: 'Well, at least it solves one problem. She can probably do everything and I'll just simply lounge around arranging flowers.'
- comes up, followed by Sunday's second quote -
Page 7/Scene 23 - Quentin: 'And loving me.'
- coming up, followed by the script continuing with:
23 CONTD CONTD 23
TRACY And loving you.
Quentin starts for the rear of the car to open the trunk.
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End of scene.
And so far there are still no differences between the way DC's and Grayson Hall's scripts are written. However, in DC's script he has added a notation that the opening of Scene 23 where the car pulls up to the house will be shot from the interior of the car and through the window.
And so far as any differences in the dialogue go, in the delivered lines there are a few words dropped or added, but nothing significant. However, Tracy's "And loving you" was completely dropped.
And so far as the directions and descriptions go, as already indicated above, the start of Scene 23 is shot from inside the car, though because it was raining on the day that bit was shot -
- the windshield wipers are also on - and after Quentin and Tracy get out of the car, they do not unpack the backseat because at first they simply look up at the house in amazement with Tracy remaining standing on the passenger side of the car and Quentin going to open the trunk, as could be seen in -
- Friday's first capture - and after removing all the luggage and slamming the trunk closed is when Quentin says that he's sure the housekeeper looks like Mrs. Danvers as he makes his way to the passenger side of the car to reach into the backseat for more things as Tracy makes he remark about the housekeeper doing everything while she arranges flowers, as can be seen in -
- Sunday's first capture - and obviously, the end of Scene 23 doesn't have Quentin going to the rear of the car to open the trunk because he's already been there, done that, so, as can be seen in -
- Sunday's second capture, they're still standing on the passenger side of the car as the scene concludes.