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« on: November 22, 2016, 10:50:45 PM »
Moving on to the next scene, which is something of a rarity in this section of the script because it does actually appear in the current version of the film, though not entirely as scripted:
And obviously, when it comes to the scene as scripted, there's no sort of dialogue whatsoever. However, in the film as it currently stands, a Quentin voiceover was added after the marathon editing session, and it plays as follows:
"Alex..."
"...you know there's only one way we're going to end
all of this..."
"...We've got to go back in there and find Carlotta..."
"...because she's the one who's keeping the spirit alive --"
Which would seem to be a reworking of Quentin's "There's only one way to end it. We've got to go back in there and face it down --" from Scene 216. But because the reworking puts finding Carlotta front and center, it obviously flies in the face of the part of Scene 216 in which Tracy asks about Carlotta and Alex says he doesn't think they'll find her.
And speaking of Carlotta, Grayson's script has notes for Scene 217. She writes that Carlotta feels TRAPPED and PANIC - that she and Angelique have fought - that Carlotta is a little wild looking - and that there's desperate fear. She also wrote one other thing, but sadly the words go off the edge of the page, so it's impossible to figure out.
217 INT - TOWER ROOM - NIGHT 217 The room is in darkness and through the window, as if someone is watching, the four of them can be seen approaching the house. Then RACK FOCUS to Carlotta in the EXTREME F.G. as she stands there looking down at them. As they EXIT THE SHOT below, Carlotta turns away in thought. TIGHTEN TO CARLOTTA'S EXTREME CLOSE- UP. |
And obviously, when it comes to the scene as scripted, there's no sort of dialogue whatsoever. However, in the film as it currently stands, a Quentin voiceover was added after the marathon editing session, and it plays as follows:
"Alex..."
"...you know there's only one way we're going to end
all of this..."
"...We've got to go back in there and find Carlotta..."
"...because she's the one who's keeping the spirit alive --"
Which would seem to be a reworking of Quentin's "There's only one way to end it. We've got to go back in there and face it down --" from Scene 216. But because the reworking puts finding Carlotta front and center, it obviously flies in the face of the part of Scene 216 in which Tracy asks about Carlotta and Alex says he doesn't think they'll find her.
And speaking of Carlotta, Grayson's script has notes for Scene 217. She writes that Carlotta feels TRAPPED and PANIC - that she and Angelique have fought - that Carlotta is a little wild looking - and that there's desperate fear. She also wrote one other thing, but sadly the words go off the edge of the page, so it's impossible to figure out.