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Current Talk '24 I / Re: And Now The Return of Another New Slideshow (Sort of), Part 2 [**Now featuring alternate versions of scenes - see replies #18,#21,#23,#49,#64,#69,#76,#88,#90,#100,#105,#107,#115**]
« on: August 24, 2017, 05:52:11 PM »
Let's backtrack a little and then wrap up Scene 177 as it appears in DC's script:
And that's when Monday's first quote -
- comes up, followed in the script by:
And that's when Monday's first quote -
- comes up, followed in the script by:
End of scene and end of sequence.
And when it comes to the differences in this part of the scene, I'll be back to do them later...
CAROLYN - DOWNWARD ANGLE Stokes, with weapon, approaches Carolyn. She is held down by the men. A look of pure terror comes into her eyes. CAROLYN'S POV - STOKES as he hovers over her, the deadly weapon in his hands. REVERSE WIDEN as she goes on writhing and SCREAMING. He poises the stake over her heart. The deputies have all they can do to keep her under control. Stokes raises the hammer. rack focus to Roger A look of deep anguish on his face as he shouts at Stokes. 177 CONTD (2) (2) CONTD 177 |
And that's when Monday's first quote -
Page 75/Scene 177 - Roger: 'No, Eliot, don't do it!! You can't destroy her like this! There must be some other way!'
- comes up, followed in the script by:
WIDEN as he runs in and wields the hammer. |
And that's when Monday's first quote -
Page 75/Scene 177 - Stokes: 'There is no other way, Roger! You must believe that!'
- comes up, followed in the script by:
The Sheriff has moved in and removed Roger's hand from Stokes' arm. He tries to steady Roger, who stares in horror at the upraised hammer in Stokes' hand, then down at Carolyn's terror stricken face. EXTREME CLOSE UP - CAROLYN'S EYES We see the burning hatred she feels for Stokes. CLOSE SHOT OF HAND HOLDING THE HAMMER As the hand brings the hammer down, CAMERA WHIP PANS with it until it smashes into the stake and we see the stake being driven into Carolyn's chest and the blood spurting out. SHOT WIDENS TO include Carolyn's face as she lets out an UNEARTHLY SCREAM. CAMERA WHIP PANS to Todd as he emits a WILD, HALF-CRAZED SCREAM and collapses. CAROLYN - DOWNWARD ANGLE The stake has been driven through her heart. Blood oozes out of her chest. Her eyes are closed. CAMERA SLOW ZOOM TO CLOSE UP of her face looking serene. CAMERA PULLS BACK AND VIEW WIDENS to show Roger standing over her. He realizes she is at piece now. |
End of scene and end of sequence.
And when it comes to the differences in this part of the scene, I'll be back to do them later...