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« on: October 18, 2016, 09:24:08 PM »
Beginning the next scene as scripted (using Grayson's script):
And that's when yesterday's quote -
- comes up.
And when it comes to differences in the dialogue, after Quentin asks the first part of his quote ("Isn't it enough that you killed her?"), in more unscripted dialogue, Tracy asks -
"What are you talking about?...What's wrong with you?..."
- after which Quentin asks the second part of his quote ("Won't you ever leave us alone?...ever?") - and then in more unscripted dialogue, a somewhat anxious and confused Tracy says -
"Quentin, it's me."
And when it comes to the differences in the descriptions and directions, Quentin doesn't actually see Laura until after Tracy asks what's wrong with him -
- and before she makes a gesture of nodding her head no and tries to tell him that it's her.
LAURA 185 SUBCONSCIOUS MEMORY CUT Laura It is no longer Tracy but as he begins to re-enact the moment of her death. INTERCUT these MEMORY SHOTS throughout the rest of the scene. QUENTIN - TRACY As Quentin slowly moves toward her, Tracy begins to back away. |
And that's when yesterday's quote -
Page 86/Scene 185 - Quentin: 'Isn't it enough that you killed her?...Won't you ever leave us alone?...ever?'
- comes up.
And when it comes to differences in the dialogue, after Quentin asks the first part of his quote ("Isn't it enough that you killed her?"), in more unscripted dialogue, Tracy asks -
"What are you talking about?...What's wrong with you?..."
- after which Quentin asks the second part of his quote ("Won't you ever leave us alone?...ever?") - and then in more unscripted dialogue, a somewhat anxious and confused Tracy says -
"Quentin, it's me."
And when it comes to the differences in the descriptions and directions, Quentin doesn't actually see Laura until after Tracy asks what's wrong with him -
- and before she makes a gesture of nodding her head no and tries to tell him that it's her.