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Current Talk '24 I / Re: And Now The Return of Another New Slideshow (Sort of), Part 2 [**Now featuring alternate version
« on: September 28, 2017, 10:30:12 PM »
Wrapping up Scene 189:
And that's when Monday's quote -
- comes up, followed by Tuesday's first quote -
- coming up, followed by Tuesday's second quote -
- coming up.
End of scene.
And when it comes to the dialogue and the lack of descriptions, directions and notations, as can be seen in Monday's capture, Barnabas starts up the stairs and then turns back to Willie -
- when he sort of gloats as the completion of that day's quote, which he delivers exactly as scripted - and as we can see in Tuesday's first capture, Barnabas continues up the stairs and reaches the top as -
- a worried Willie delivers that day's first quote almost exactly as scripted with the exception of saying "You ain't done nothin' to Jeff, have ya?" - and as can be seen in Tuesday's second capture, Barnabas swings around and with more gloat in his voice he delivers that day's second quote -
- exactly as scripted - and that only causes Willie to become more confused -
- as the camera trucks in on him (and the audience remains just as confused because, as the film stands, we never do find out what Barnabas has done for Jeff... ).
189 CONTD CONTD 189 |
And that's when Monday's quote -
Page 85/Scene 189 - Barnabas: 'She won't be seeing Jeff for several days. I've seen to that.'
- comes up, followed by Tuesday's first quote -
Page 85/Scene 189 - Willie (panicky): 'What're you talking about? You ain't done nothing to Jeff, have you?'
- coming up, followed by Tuesday's second quote -
Page 85/Scene 189 - Barnabas: 'On the contrary, Willie. I've done something for him.'
- coming up.
End of scene.
And when it comes to the dialogue and the lack of descriptions, directions and notations, as can be seen in Monday's capture, Barnabas starts up the stairs and then turns back to Willie -
- when he sort of gloats as the completion of that day's quote, which he delivers exactly as scripted - and as we can see in Tuesday's first capture, Barnabas continues up the stairs and reaches the top as -
- a worried Willie delivers that day's first quote almost exactly as scripted with the exception of saying "You ain't done nothin' to Jeff, have ya?" - and as can be seen in Tuesday's second capture, Barnabas swings around and with more gloat in his voice he delivers that day's second quote -
- exactly as scripted - and that only causes Willie to become more confused -
- as the camera trucks in on him (and the audience remains just as confused because, as the film stands, we never do find out what Barnabas has done for Jeff... ).