Picking up Scene 59 where we left off in reply #73 and with yesterday's quote, which was Quentin's reply to Alex' remark about Collinwood supposedly being haunted by "a young beautiful servant girl":
Page 23/Scene 59 - Quentin: 'If she cleans well, we'll hire her.'
And that's followed by the script continuing with:
CLAIRE It's time for lunch.
She gets up and starts for the kitchen.
What do you want - ham or tuna- fish?
ALEX Both.
QUENTIN The same.
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And that's when today's quote -
Page 23/Scene 59 - Claire (kissing Quentin): 'Lovely having you here ... despite my welcome.'
- comes up, followed by the script explaining:
She EXITS into the kitchen.
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And as far as the differences in the dialogue go, before bringing up lunch, Claire laughs at Quentin's remark about hiring the girl if she cleans well - and Claire's quoted line from today is dropped from the scene - and obviously it was dropped for the same reason that the beginning of Scene 59 was reworked: because Scene 58 was reworked - and in DC's version of the script, Claire's dropped line actually has a box drawn around it and a big X drawn in the box - however, DC's script does not replace it with what Claire actually does do and say before she leaves the room, and that's to sigh and say "Right" as if she should have known they'd want both.
And when it comes to the differences in the descriptions and directions, Claire just simply stands up before she asks if they want ham or tuna - and we might presume she's going to the kitchen when she exits, but we don't actually see her go there because she simply leaves the room.
And after tomorrow's quote comes up, we'll get into the section of Scene 59 that's different in DC's script from the way it's written in Grayson's script. But more on that tomorrow...