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Current Talk '24 I / Re: And Now The Return of Another New Slideshow (Sort of), Part 2 [**Now featuring alternate version
« on: October 05, 2017, 04:32:03 PM »
There really isn't all that much that's different about the novelization of Scene 191 vs. how it appears in DC's script. About the only two things worth pointing out are that instead of -
- the novelization has -
- and instead of -
- the novelization has -
191 CONTD CONTD 191
They walk along a bit. Jeff senses a change in her
mood. She is very somber.
And that's when Friday's quote -Page 86/Scene 191 - Jeff: 'Hey, what's the matter. Be happy.'
- comes up, followed in the script by:
they stop
And that's when yesterday's quote -Page 86/Scene 191 - Maggie: 'I can't be Jeff -- remembering Carolyn.'
- coming up, followed in the script by:
JEFF
Don't.
He pulls her to him. They look at each other and kiss.
- the novelization has -
They strolled on toward the greenhouse. And she became silent. Jeff, sensing a change in her mood, gave her a concerned glance. It wasn't like her to be so somber. Maggie looked at him apologetically. "Don't let me spoil this for you. It's just that I'm feeling blue. Elizabeth is so unhappy." "I know." "And you can't blame her. Remembering Carolyn and what happened." "Don't," Jeff begged her and drew her to him. Their eyes met in a mutual love and understanding. They kissed. But the kiss was interrupted by the sound of glass shatter- ing in the greenhouse. |
- and instead of -
Page 86/Scene 191 - Jeff (rumpling his hair): 'David, why don't you practice picking up the picnic things?'
- coming up, followed by today's quote -Page 86/Scene 191 - David (running off): 'Oh, you just want to be alone.'
- coming up
They look at each other and start walking toward the
car. As they reach the car and Jeff climbs in:
- the novelization has -
"David, why don't you practice picking up the picnic things?" With a teasing look David jeered, "Sure! You two just want to be alone!" Laughing delightedly, he raced off "Smart youngster," Jeff said, smiling at Maggie. "Too smart," she said, staring after the boy with resig- nation. Then they turned and strolled toward Jeff's car. When they reached it, Jeff climbed in. |