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Current Talk '24 I / Re: And Now The Return of Another New Slideshow (Sort of), Part 2 [**Now featuring alternate version
« on: October 01, 2017, 04:38:10 PM »
Here's the way this part of the scene appears in DC's script:
Presumably the added dialogue was intended to replace Maggie's first lines. And as we'll see as the scene progresses, there's actually several places where DC has dialogue changes in the scene. Seems almost like a waste of their time when the scene doesn't even make it to the film...
191 EXT: GREENHOUSE - COLLINWOOD GROUNDS - DAY 191 A blanket is spread out on the grass in front of the greenhouse. Maggie and Jeff, arm in arm, are slowly walking. David can be seen playing in the greenhouse in b.g. _____________________________ / MAGGIE \ |You'd better get started. You want| |to be in Boston before dark, don't | JEFF |you? | I know it's \______________________________/ a great break JEFF (looking at watch) But I still I still can't believe this is don't fell right happening. about leaving you MAGGIE MAG Barnabas thinks you're very talented. Don't worry It'll be fine anyway JEFF you'll only be I guess he must to recommend me to the Evanston Gallery. gone for few days |
Presumably the added dialogue was intended to replace Maggie's first lines. And as we'll see as the scene progresses, there's actually several places where DC has dialogue changes in the scene. Seems almost like a waste of their time when the scene doesn't even make it to the film...