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« on: February 02, 2017, 06:12:03 AM »
And here's the original draft's version of the first part of Maggie at the Old House, much of which is identical, some of which is not:
I do like the additional description of the cobwebs because in the film there are plenty of those.
And is it only me, but the "LOW MOAN" and the "coming", well...
40 EXT. OLD HOUSE - NIGHT 40 From the door of the OLD HOUSE, we see the glare of a flashlight approaching. There is a flash of lightning. Maggie carries a flashlight. 41 MAGGIE'S POV - OLD HOUSE 41 It is a dark, deserted, somber old house. 42 MAGGIE 42 as she hesitates, suddenly a little fearful. Then resolutely, goes to the door. She opens it, flashes her light in the dark interior. The CAMERA PANS with the flashlight. We see the remnants of what once must have been a beautiful house. There is furniture; some covered with dust sheets, some not. There are cobwebs. The paint and paper are peeling. Maggie walks a few steps inside the house, leaving the door open. 43 INT: OLD HOUSE - NIGHT 43 From the drawing room the CAMERA catches Maggie's light. We see her apprehensive, worried face above it. MAGGIE David! There is no answer. Maggie enters the drawing room, flashing her light around the room. MAGGIE Don't hide, David! Maggie hears a LOW MOAN. She turns toward the stair- case. She frowns, listens. She hears the MOAN again. It is from upstairs. Maggie runs to the stairs. 44 INT. STAIRS - SHOOTING DOWN 44 MAGGIE (loudly) David, I'm coming. Maggie runs up the stairs. |
I do like the additional description of the cobwebs because in the film there are plenty of those.
And is it only me, but the "LOW MOAN" and the "coming", well...