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Current Talk '24 I / Re: And Now The Return of Another New Slideshow (Sort of), Part 2 [**Now featuring alternate versions of scenes - see replies #18,#21,#23,#49,#64,#69,#76,#88,#90,#100,#105,#107,#115**]
« on: January 09, 2017, 04:10:02 PM »
Wrapping up Scene 13, beginning with today's quote -
- coming up, followed in the script by:
End of scene.
And when it comes to the dialogue, the descriptions, and the directions for this scene, we have no way at this point of knowing if what's scripted and/or crossed out is how things actually played out because this scene is no longer in the film and appears to be lost.
And here's how the scene is scripted to conclude in the original draft:
Not all that different from the final version - though I am a bit disappointed that Roger's line from back in reply #23 was dropped. But I suppose it is possible that it might have been used as Roger's ad-libbing as he enters up the stairs. Though, sadly, we'll never know... And when reading DC's script, one probably presumes the "(L to R)" reference means left to right - but given the indication of a two-shot of Elizabeth and Roger in the original draft, I wonder if it actually means Liz to Roger?
Page 4/Scene 13 - Maggie: 'He's dead -- he's dead!'
- coming up, followed in the script by:
TRUCK into TIGHT TWO-SHOT (L to R). rush to the room. |
End of scene.
And when it comes to the dialogue, the descriptions, and the directions for this scene, we have no way at this point of knowing if what's scripted and/or crossed out is how things actually played out because this scene is no longer in the film and appears to be lost.
And here's how the scene is scripted to conclude in the original draft:
MAGGIE He's...he's...dead! ELIZABETH - ROGER FAST TRUCK BACK TO GROUP SHOT. PAN them as they rush to into the room. Mrs. Johnson leading the way. |
Not all that different from the final version - though I am a bit disappointed that Roger's line from back in reply #23 was dropped. But I suppose it is possible that it might have been used as Roger's ad-libbing as he enters up the stairs. Though, sadly, we'll never know... And when reading DC's script, one probably presumes the "(L to R)" reference means left to right - but given the indication of a two-shot of Elizabeth and Roger in the original draft, I wonder if it actually means Liz to Roger?