Picking up with Scene 105:
CLOSE UP - CAROLYN PROFILE
She is aware that Barnabas is experiencing something importa-t.
MAGGIE - WIDE ANGLE
She is at the bar. Jeff joins her.
BARNABAS
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And that when Thursday's second quote -
Page 38/Scene 105 - Barnabas: 'Let me get you some champagne, Carolyn.'
- comes up, followed in the script by:
105. (CONT'D)
Barnabas as he moves toward Maggie and Jeff at the bar.
JEFF (to Barman) Scotch and Soda and a dry Rob Roy.
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And that when Friday's quote -
Page 39/Scene 105 - Maggie: 'Quite a crowd. Doesn't everyone look great!'
- comes up, followed by Saturday's first quote -
Page 39/Scene 105 - Man (V.O.): 'Jeff!'
- coming up, followed by Saturday's second quote -
Page 39/Scene 105 - Jeff (as he sees his friend): 'Maggie, I'll be right back.'
- coming up.
And we're going to leave things there because there's quite a bit to get into because the film doesn't quite play like that. There is no close up in profile of Carolyn where the script combined with DC's notation indicates because there's simply a few seconds shot with the same camera set up as before with -
- Barnabas, Carolyn and Todd as Carolyn continues to stare at Barnabas and his gaze shifts to presumably spotting Maggie in the organ room (and speaking of that shot, the "Yes, this is her last night at" portion of Julia line is delivered over the shot of Maggie as she moves off toward the organ room, whereas the "Collinwood, isn't it" portion is delivered over the above shot) - and then, despite the fact of the portion of the script that says we would see Maggie at the bar and Jeff joining her being crossed out, something very similar does indeed appear in the film because things switch from Barnabas, Carolyn and Todd to Maggie entering the organ room, seeing Jeff in costume while another woman in the room watches them, and then Maggie blurts out an unscripted -
"Oh, Jeff!" - (and l love how not only Barnabas is watching them from the drawing room, but -
- so is Julia) - and Jeff laughs as Mrs. Johnson appears -
- and moves towards the drawing room and the other woman begins to move toward the bench before Maggie moves to hug Jeff and remark an unscripted -
"Oh, you look great!" - rather than what appeared in the slideshow as Friday's quote: "Quite a crowd. Doesn't everyone look great!" - and then "John" appears at the door to the organ room as Jeff asks Maggie and unscripted -
"Want a drink?" - and soon after John comes into the organ room and -
- the other woman smiles at him and he soon moves toward her before Maggie answer Jeff with an unscripted -
"Yes." -
and then things actually do go back to Barnabas, Carolyn and Todd in the drawing room as Barnabas turns to Carolyn and offers to get her a drink, though rather than champagne, he actually offers "Let me get you some punch, Carolyn" - and after he moves off is when we actually see Carolyn looking quite none too pleased as she -
- definitely knows something important is afoot with Barnabas. And yes, "important" is actually spelled as "importa-t" in the script.
And even though there's more to get into when comes to the part of the script that I've shared, I'm going to hold off and do what's left in another post so as to give everyone a chance to absorb what's covered in this post before embarking on even more changes and unscripted additions in the remainder...