I've discovered another editing difference in the version of the pilot that's circulated online versus the version that's been shown at Fests:
I meant to mention that I find yesterday's quote in the slideshow -
Page 11 - Victoria: 'Only that he's troubled, and runs
through tutors like most kids run through socks.' - to be one of the most amusing in the script. I did remember that, unfortunately, the amusing part regarding David going through tutors like most kids run through socks doesn't appear in the original cut of the pilot, the one that's been shown at Fests - only the part about David being troubled does. However, when I checked the online version to see if I could get a screen capture of the part where Vicki says David is troubled, I discovered even that part doesn't appear in the online version. In fact, the exchange between Vicki and Carolyn regarding David is very different.
The Fest version (which is very close to the script):
Carolyn
So...how much did they tell you about David?
Vicki
Only that he's troubled. And I read his psych evaluation on the trip up. According to his shrink, he's hyperactive and suffers from A.D.D...
Carolyn
Fascinating. David's problems go much deeper than that.
(A beat)
I hope I'm not scaring you. (laughs)
Vicki
(nervous laughter - regaining composure) He's a little boy, not the Boogeyman.
The online version:
Carolyn
So...how much did they tell you about David and his imaginary friend Sarah? I hope I'm not scaring you. One time, David drained all the blood from a squirrel. (laughs)
Vicki
(nervous laughter - regaining composure) He's a little boy, not the Boogeyman.
No mention of Sarah in the Fest version - and no mention of draining squirrel blood. And none of any of that is in the script, so quite possibly it was come up with on the day of filming - possibly even as an adlib...