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13 Jake 2.0 (2003-04) Photo : Everett Collection Many may not remember this delightful sci-fi show starring Christopher Gorham as a young nanobot-infused superhuman working for the NSA, but we do. It had a lot going for it, including David Greenwalt (Buffy, Angel, Grimm) and Silvio Horta (Ugly Betty) as executive producers. It’s disappointing that the series didn’t live beyond 16 episodes because if given the chance, it could have developed into something special. |
161 INT: HALLWAY OUTSIDE TODD'S ROOM - NIGHT 161 TIGHT ON TODD. As he moves down the hallway, CAMERA TRUCKS IN FRONT OF HIM. He stops momentarily as he reaches part of hall parallel to first floor landing. CAMERA PANS LEFT with him and as he passes this spot we see another policeman with his back to us looking out the window on first floor landing. Todd continues down hall as CAMERA TRUCKS IN BACK of him. As he gets to the entrance to Carolyn's room he stops. TODD - CLOSE UP As he reacts to what he sees. SHERIFF AND STOKES - TODD'S POV They are both looking out the window. The Sheriff is on the two-way radio. HAND HELD CAMERA TRUCKS heard ad libbing instructions to men below. |
And continuing with more of Scene 190, beginning with Quentin's reaction to Alex telling him that Tracy understands:
Quentin turns and looks at him hard. Then he turns to
Carlotta.
And that's when today's first quote -Page 90/Scene 190 - Quentin: 'Where is Mrs. Collins?'
- comes up, followed by today's second quote -Page 90/Scene 190 - Carlotta: 'I'm sure she's in her room, sir.'
- comes up.
And when it comes to any differences in the dialogue, Quentin actually asks "Where's Mrs. Collins?" - and Carlotta's response is simply "Well, I'm sure she's in her room", with addressing Quentin as "sir" dropped once again.
And when it comes to any differences in the descriptions and directions go, Quentin doesn't actually turn to look hard at Alex - he does, however, turn toward Carlotta, which then prompts Alex to turn to her as well - and can I just say that I absolutely love the butter wouldn't melt in her mouth look of innocence on Carlotta's face -
before she tells Quentin that she's sure Tracy is in her room!! And Grayson has a notation in her script that Carlotta should deliver that line with a where else would she be demeanor, which is exactly how it comes across.
...
First off Quentin actually says, "I didn't do a damn thing. I've been painting all night." - though the subtitles have -
- with "damn" and "all night" missing - but both lines are entirely missing in the closed captioning - and then Quentin asks, "Now, what are you so upset about?" - and the subtitles completely reflect that - and at least in that instance the closed captioning has -
- with just the "Now" missing - and after Alex informs Quentin that he tried to drawn Tracy, and after some silence between them due to Quentin's shock at what Alex has said, Alex starts off with, "Quentin it wasn't you. It was Charles Collins drowning his wife--" before Quentin cuts him off with something that's unscripted rather than Carlotta having a line after Alex has completely finished his explanation of what really happened - and with that in mind the subtitles have -
- though the closed captioning has -
- so take your pick of what Quentin actually says because it's hard to decipher because they're talking over one another...
To be continued...
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