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Current Talk '24 I / Re: And Now The Return of Another New Slideshow (Sort of) [**Now featuring alternate versions of sce
« on: December 31, 2016, 06:44:01 PM »
Now, as for what is different with the dialogue, the descriptions and the directions:
In Scene 244 we see Quentin enter the entryway -
- before he enters the foyer, but the rest of the scene plays pretty much as scripted. (But isn't it a shame that the flowers in the vase seem to be dying without Carlotta to tend them. )
Scene 245 actually concludes with Quentin turning and beginning up the stairs -
- as his footsteps on the stairs can also be heard.
In Scene 246 we do not see Quentin climb the stairs, but we do see him start toward the gallery and the Master Bedroom.
In his script DC added:
But if that was ever shot, it isn't currently in the film.
In Scene 247 we do indeed see Quentin come up the stairs toward camera and pick up his canvases, but he immediately turns to exit the room, so we do not see a slow truck to his close-up, or him looking around, as if sensing a presence in the house.
In Scene 248 we actually see Quentin descend the few stairs from the Master Bedroom -
- to the gallery before the camera moves in on his closeup and then his view of the far end of the corridor.
In Scene 249, after Tracy gets out of the car, she looks up at the house -
- (seemingly to the tower, though we don't see her P.O.V.) before she honks the horn, whereupon we see a shot of the foyer as the sound -
- of the horn echos throughout, and then Tracy looks to the house again and quickly moves in the direction of the front door.
Scene 250 plays exactly as scripted.
As part of Scene 251, after the script indicates that Tracy comes toward camera, DC adds:
In his script DC added:
But that's not quite how things play. We do see the mirror shot -
- and pan to Tracy, but soon after we see Tracy, she once again calls out -
Quentin!
- this time while looking up the stairs, and then she ascends the stairs -
- to the first landing and moves beyond, but there is no shot from the vantage point of the third floor landing.
And then at the outset of Scene 252, as Tracy can be seen from the gallery, she calls out again -
Quentin!
- as she reaches the second floor corridor - but, as can be seen in yesterday's capture, she calls out to Quentin again and -
- asks him what's taking so long before she suddenly stops, noticing Quentin's canvases stacked against the wall near the wall to the bedroom and starting toward the steps to the Master Bedroom.
(And I never noticed before that as Tracy makes her way down the corridor, we can see that the door at the far end that swung open is now closed.)
In Scene 244 we see Quentin enter the entryway -
- before he enters the foyer, but the rest of the scene plays pretty much as scripted. (But isn't it a shame that the flowers in the vase seem to be dying without Carlotta to tend them. )
Scene 245 actually concludes with Quentin turning and beginning up the stairs -
- as his footsteps on the stairs can also be heard.
In Scene 246 we do not see Quentin climb the stairs, but we do see him start toward the gallery and the Master Bedroom.
In his script DC added:
246A FROM AREA OF GALLERY WINDOWS |
But if that was ever shot, it isn't currently in the film.
In Scene 247 we do indeed see Quentin come up the stairs toward camera and pick up his canvases, but he immediately turns to exit the room, so we do not see a slow truck to his close-up, or him looking around, as if sensing a presence in the house.
In Scene 248 we actually see Quentin descend the few stairs from the Master Bedroom -
- to the gallery before the camera moves in on his closeup and then his view of the far end of the corridor.
In Scene 249, after Tracy gets out of the car, she looks up at the house -
- (seemingly to the tower, though we don't see her P.O.V.) before she honks the horn, whereupon we see a shot of the foyer as the sound -
- of the horn echos throughout, and then Tracy looks to the house again and quickly moves in the direction of the front door.
Scene 250 plays exactly as scripted.
As part of Scene 251, after the script indicates that Tracy comes toward camera, DC adds:
In his script DC added:
MIRROR SHOT + PAN TO HER THEN FROM THIRD FL. LANDING |
But that's not quite how things play. We do see the mirror shot -
- and pan to Tracy, but soon after we see Tracy, she once again calls out -
Quentin!
- this time while looking up the stairs, and then she ascends the stairs -
- to the first landing and moves beyond, but there is no shot from the vantage point of the third floor landing.
And then at the outset of Scene 252, as Tracy can be seen from the gallery, she calls out again -
Quentin!
- as she reaches the second floor corridor - but, as can be seen in yesterday's capture, she calls out to Quentin again and -
- asks him what's taking so long before she suddenly stops, noticing Quentin's canvases stacked against the wall near the wall to the bedroom and starting toward the steps to the Master Bedroom.
(And I never noticed before that as Tracy makes her way down the corridor, we can see that the door at the far end that swung open is now closed.)