Wrapping up Scene 93, beginning with Friday's quote -
Page 34/Scene 93 - Barnabas (OS): 'Carolyn! What an unexpected pleasure!'
- coming up, followed in the script by:
CLOSE-UP BARNABAS
At the drawing room door. He crosses to Carolyn.
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And that's when Saturday's quote -
Page 34/Scene 93 - Barnabas: 'Have you come to see how we're doing? I don't think you need to work any longer, Willie.'
- comes up, followed in the script by:
Willie exits up the stairs.
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End of scene - though certainly not end of sequence. And as usual things don't quite play exactly that way in the film.
When it comes to the dialogue, it's actually all delivered as written. However, beyond the differences in the directions and descriptions, there's actually a lot more to them. To start off, Carolyn immediately turns her head to -
- the doorway upon hearing her name called from off screen - but then as can be seen in Friday's capture for the slideshow, Barnabas comes on screen, though not in close-up, as he moves toward Carolyn -
- while telling her what an unexpected pleasure it is to see her, after which there's a close-up of Willie looking as if he's -
- quite concerned for Carolyn's safety - and then while Barnabas asks Carolyn if she's come to see how they're doing -
- he looks at her, but after she nods in the affirmative, Barn, as can be seen in Saturday's capture for the slideshow, turns toward Willie to -
- tell him he needn't work any longer - and after Carolyn also -
- turns toward Willie, he nods and picks up a paint can, and he still has -
- the expression of concern on his face. And that's the actual end of Scene 93. Willie does not leave the room quite yet...