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Current Talk '24 I / Re: And Now The Return of Another New Slideshow (Sort of), Part 2 [**Now featuring alternate versions of scenes - see replies #18,#21,#23,#49,#64,#69,#76,#88,#90,#100,#105,#107,#115**]
« on: June 23, 2017, 06:12:19 PM »
Dealing with today's new scene:
And that's when today's quote -
- comes up, followed in the script by:
And when it comes to the dialogue, the descriptions, and the directions for this scene, the beginning of the scene plays pretty much exactly as scripted, however, David's chant is not only sing-songy, but it echos throughout the empty swimming pool building, and he repeats it 5 times before he loses control of the ball - and after that happens we see a close-up of David as he watches the ball fly over his head -
- but in this scene we don't yet see completely where the ball goes because it's still bouncing, nor does David heave a sigh - though we do see David turn and run in the direction of where he sees the ball is going.
120 INT: ABANDONED INDOOR SWIMMING POOL - DAY 120 It is late afternoon, just before dinner. The storm has ended. David is bouncing a ball in the empty pool. This is a place he comes to often to play, but the sadness of this day still has him in its grip and his heart really isn't in what he's doing. Almost subconsciously, he begins to chant as he bounces the ball up against the wall. |
And that's when today's quote -
Page 51/Scene 120 - David (sing-songy): 'If I catch this one, Carolyn isn't dead -- if I catch this one, Carolyn isn't dead --'
- comes up, followed in the script by:
He bounces the ball again and this time, instead of hitting the wall it catches a corner, makes a high bounce. It bounces out of the pool, into foyer. David HEAVES A SIGH and goes out after it. |
And when it comes to the dialogue, the descriptions, and the directions for this scene, the beginning of the scene plays pretty much exactly as scripted, however, David's chant is not only sing-songy, but it echos throughout the empty swimming pool building, and he repeats it 5 times before he loses control of the ball - and after that happens we see a close-up of David as he watches the ball fly over his head -
- but in this scene we don't yet see completely where the ball goes because it's still bouncing, nor does David heave a sigh - though we do see David turn and run in the direction of where he sees the ball is going.