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Current Talk '24 I / Re: The Return of Yet Another New Slideshow (Sort of) [** Now featuring unshot Julia material - see
« on: October 20, 2015, 08:52:08 PM »
Continuing with the next scenes in the sequence:
And that's when today's first quote -
- comes up, followed by the script continuing with:
And that's when today's second quote -
- comes up.
And as for what's different about the dialogue, at first Willie actually says "Yeah, Barnabas. ... What is it?" - and Barnabas actually pauses between orders, as in "Come down here, Willie! ... Come down here now!" - then after Barnabas orders him down, Willie actually says "What's the matter, Barnabas? ... Uh, uh, I, I ain't done nothin'."
And so far as the direction and descriptions go, they're quite a bit different. Willie doesn't simply appear at the top of the stairs, he comes running down them as he delivers his first line, and he comes to a dead stop on the next-to-top landing when he sees the angry expression on Barnabas' face - and Barnabas doesn't move to the bottom of the stairs in Scene 197 because in Scene 195 he's already run up to the first landing - and Scene 198 is not shot from behind Willie but in front of him - and after Barnabas orders him down in Scene 197, as Willie tries to explain in Scene 198 that he hasn't done anything, he comes down to the same landing that Barnabas is on.
196 ANOTHER ANGLE As a terrified Willie appears at the top of the stairs. WILLIE Yeah, yeah, Barnabas? Wha...? 197 BACK TO BARNABAS As gripping his cane, he moves toward the bottom of the stairs. |
And that's when today's first quote -
Page 91/Scene 197 - Barnabas: 'Come down here, Willie! Come down here now!'
- comes up, followed by the script continuing with:
198 FROM IN BACK OF WILLIE As he starts nervously down the stairs. |
And that's when today's second quote -
Page 91/Scene 198 - Willie: 'Wha ... what's a matter, Barnabas? I ain't done nothin'.'
- comes up.
And as for what's different about the dialogue, at first Willie actually says "Yeah, Barnabas. ... What is it?" - and Barnabas actually pauses between orders, as in "Come down here, Willie! ... Come down here now!" - then after Barnabas orders him down, Willie actually says "What's the matter, Barnabas? ... Uh, uh, I, I ain't done nothin'."
And so far as the direction and descriptions go, they're quite a bit different. Willie doesn't simply appear at the top of the stairs, he comes running down them as he delivers his first line, and he comes to a dead stop on the next-to-top landing when he sees the angry expression on Barnabas' face - and Barnabas doesn't move to the bottom of the stairs in Scene 197 because in Scene 195 he's already run up to the first landing - and Scene 198 is not shot from behind Willie but in front of him - and after Barnabas orders him down in Scene 197, as Willie tries to explain in Scene 198 that he hasn't done anything, he comes down to the same landing that Barnabas is on.