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« on: May 08, 2017, 12:48:01 AM »
Picking up with the next section of Scene 105, we do indeed see Barnabas in the backgroud as he makes his way into the organ room as Jeff places his order with the barman, however, the order is not the same as scripted because what Jeff actually says is -
"All right, one punch and nothing for me."
- (apparently a dry Rob Roy may not be Jeff's drink of choice) and I do love how Barnabas comes to a stop and -
- carefully waits for an opportunity (and this time around not only is Julia watching from the drawing room, but, naturally, so is Carolyn) - and apparently since Maggie had already complimented Jeff in the earlier unscripted section, she doesn't get to say "Quite a crowd. Doesn't everyone look great!" at all as that's dropped completely - and then, again unlike the script, instead of it being a man's voice calling out to Jeff, it's the other woman in the room who is then heard to say an unscripted -
"Jeff, I'd like you to meet John."
- as Maggie and Jeff turn to look behind them and Jeff presumably sees the woman who's actually his friend - and then Maggie and Jeff turn back to each other as Jeff actually says -
"Excuse me a second."
- rather than the scripted "Maggie, I'll be right back" as "John" looks over behind them - and Maggie quickly responds with an unscripted -
"Okay."
- as Jeff turns to go over to the man and woman behind them.
And that brings us up to all the changes and additions to the part of the script that I'd posted earlier. But if you think those are all the changes and additions to Scene 105, don't fool yourself because there's more to come next time...
"All right, one punch and nothing for me."
- (apparently a dry Rob Roy may not be Jeff's drink of choice) and I do love how Barnabas comes to a stop and -
- carefully waits for an opportunity (and this time around not only is Julia watching from the drawing room, but, naturally, so is Carolyn) - and apparently since Maggie had already complimented Jeff in the earlier unscripted section, she doesn't get to say "Quite a crowd. Doesn't everyone look great!" at all as that's dropped completely - and then, again unlike the script, instead of it being a man's voice calling out to Jeff, it's the other woman in the room who is then heard to say an unscripted -
"Jeff, I'd like you to meet John."
- as Maggie and Jeff turn to look behind them and Jeff presumably sees the woman who's actually his friend - and then Maggie and Jeff turn back to each other as Jeff actually says -
"Excuse me a second."
- rather than the scripted "Maggie, I'll be right back" as "John" looks over behind them - and Maggie quickly responds with an unscripted -
"Okay."
- as Jeff turns to go over to the man and woman behind them.
And that brings us up to all the changes and additions to the part of the script that I'd posted earlier. But if you think those are all the changes and additions to Scene 105, don't fool yourself because there's more to come next time...