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Current Talk '24 I / Re: And Now The Return of Another New Slideshow (Sort of), Part 2 [**Now featuring alternate versions of scenes - see replies #18,#21,#23,#49,#64,#69,#76,#88,#90,#100,#105,#107,#115**]
« on: June 13, 2017, 06:24:05 PM »
Dealing with Scene 115:
And that's when Sunday's quote -
- comes up, followed in the script by:
And that's when Monday's quote -
- comes up, followed in the script by:
And when it comes to the dialogue, the directions, and the descriptions, Willie actually delivers Sunday's quote as "Oh, I can't... I can't take you in, Carolyn. Can you make it, huh? Oh...", and as he does so we hear howling in the distance as he reaches into his pocket for his handkerchief, unfolds it, and -
- starts to wipe the blood running from Carolyn's wound - and he follows that with an unscripted -
"Oh. Oh."
- as he reaches to tap Carolyn's cheek - then turns to -
- look at the house before delivering an unscripted -
"Oh, my."
- as he continues to dab the blood - and then Willie actually delivers the first part of Monday's quote as "Carolyn, don't you ever come back to Barnabas" before he taps Carolyn's cheek with -
- the bloody handkerchief and follows with the second part of Monday's quote as "He'll kill you. I swear he will. Don't you ever come back", all the while still dabbing the blood - and after we hear more howling in the distance, Willie finally stops dabbing and delivers an unscripted -
"Go on in, honey. Go on."
- and then rest of the scene progresses as scripted...
115 EXT: DRIVE TO COLLINWOOD - NIGHT 115 TRUCKING SHOT Willie is half carrying, half dragging Carolyn. Blood runs from the wounds in her neck down her dress. Willie sees the house ahead. |
And that's when Sunday's quote -
Page 46/Scene 115 - Willie: 'I can't take you in. Can you make it?'
- comes up, followed in the script by:
She starts to fall, then walks a few halting steps. |
And that's when Monday's quote -
Page 46/Scene 115 - Willie: 'Don't...don't you ever come to Barnabas. Carolyn, he'll kill you. I swear he will. Don't you ever come back.'
- comes up, followed in the script by:
Willie runs into the woods. Carolyn, barely able to walk, slowly, weavingly makes her way toward the house. |
And when it comes to the dialogue, the directions, and the descriptions, Willie actually delivers Sunday's quote as "Oh, I can't... I can't take you in, Carolyn. Can you make it, huh? Oh...", and as he does so we hear howling in the distance as he reaches into his pocket for his handkerchief, unfolds it, and -
- starts to wipe the blood running from Carolyn's wound - and he follows that with an unscripted -
"Oh. Oh."
- as he reaches to tap Carolyn's cheek - then turns to -
- look at the house before delivering an unscripted -
"Oh, my."
- as he continues to dab the blood - and then Willie actually delivers the first part of Monday's quote as "Carolyn, don't you ever come back to Barnabas" before he taps Carolyn's cheek with -
- the bloody handkerchief and follows with the second part of Monday's quote as "He'll kill you. I swear he will. Don't you ever come back", all the while still dabbing the blood - and after we hear more howling in the distance, Willie finally stops dabbing and delivers an unscripted -
"Go on in, honey. Go on."
- and then rest of the scene progresses as scripted...