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« on: February 12, 2017, 02:46:02 AM »
Once again, before tomorrow's quotes in the slideshow come up, we have a lot more stuff to deal with. And also again, first up is what we must deal with in DC's script:
And as far as any differences in the dialogue, the directions, or the descriptions go, Scene 54D does not appear in the film after Scene 54C because right after the end of Scene 54C we go right to seeing the booted feet moving down the hall portion of Scene 55 - but that is all because things then switch to Scene 54D in which we do see Maggie in close-up as she calls to David as scripted, but we also see her call an unscripted -
"David?"
- with the camera shooting her from behind - and after that we return to Scene 55 with more of the booted feet walking until the camera does indeed pan up to show the hand with the ring reaching out, however, we do not see the doorknob, so obviously nor do we see the hand touch it - then we switch to Scene 56 in which once again Maggie calls out to David questioningly, rather than the way it's scripted, and once again with the camera at her back - however, in close-up Maggie also says an unscripted -
"Answer me, David, I know you're there."
- then things switch to Scene 57, soon followed by Scene 58 where, after seeing the knob turn on her side of the door, Maggie begs an unscripted -
"David, please."
- and we follow that with Scene 59 as we see the hand not only as it moves to the key in the lock, but also as it begins to turn the key.
And yes, the ways in which the scenes appear in this post are exactly the ways they're typed in the script...
54D INT ROOM - OLD HOUSE - NIGHT 54D CLOSEUP MAGGIE She is at the door, listening intently O.S. We hear FEET MOVING DOWN THE HALL. She is afraid. MAGGIE David? 55 INT CORRIDOR OUTSIDE BEDROOM - NIGHT TIGHT on booted feet stopping outside Maggie's door. The CAMERA PANS UP SLOWLY to the door knob. A MAN'S HAND, with the same ring we saw when Daphne was strangled, reaches out, touches the door knob. He does not turn it. 56 INT - BEDROOM - NIGHT Maggie knows the footsteps have stopped there. MAGGIE David! 57 INT. CORRIDOR - NIGHT The hand turning the knob. 58 INT. - BEDROOM - NIGHT Maggie stares at the turning knob. She is terrified. 59 INT. CORRIDOR - NIGHT The hand as it moves to the key in the lock. |
And as far as any differences in the dialogue, the directions, or the descriptions go, Scene 54D does not appear in the film after Scene 54C because right after the end of Scene 54C we go right to seeing the booted feet moving down the hall portion of Scene 55 - but that is all because things then switch to Scene 54D in which we do see Maggie in close-up as she calls to David as scripted, but we also see her call an unscripted -
"David?"
- with the camera shooting her from behind - and after that we return to Scene 55 with more of the booted feet walking until the camera does indeed pan up to show the hand with the ring reaching out, however, we do not see the doorknob, so obviously nor do we see the hand touch it - then we switch to Scene 56 in which once again Maggie calls out to David questioningly, rather than the way it's scripted, and once again with the camera at her back - however, in close-up Maggie also says an unscripted -
"Answer me, David, I know you're there."
- then things switch to Scene 57, soon followed by Scene 58 where, after seeing the knob turn on her side of the door, Maggie begs an unscripted -
"David, please."
- and we follow that with Scene 59 as we see the hand not only as it moves to the key in the lock, but also as it begins to turn the key.
And yes, the ways in which the scenes appear in this post are exactly the ways they're typed in the script...