Wrapping things up with the last scenes in the sequence:
202 OMITTED
203 INT. JOSETTE'S ROOM - NIGHT
As Barnabas pulls the door open, strides in, still breathing hard, the emotion of his rage almost choking him. He stops in front of the portrait, stares up at it.
204 JOSETTE'S PORTRAIT
The beautiful girl almost seems to be looking down at him.
205 BACK TO BARNABAS
And TIGHTENING TO HIM as his eyes fill with emotion ...
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And that's when today's quote -
Page 92/Scene 205 - Barnabas (hoarsely): 'Josette ... you've come back to me. I will not lose you again.'
- comes up, followed by the script continuing with:
And as his EYES FILL THE SCREEN, HOLD for a beat, and . . .
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End of scene - finally end of the sequence - and in the pilot it's also the next act break. However, recall that back in September when this sequence was about to start, I'd mentioned that in the pilot Scenes 206 through 208 were moved to before Scenes 180 through 205, so they will be coming up next in the slideshow - though not necessarily completely as scripted - but more on that beginning tomorrow...
And as for what's different about the dialogue, it's basically delivered as written, though Barnabas actually delivers the first bit tenderly, not hoarsely, and he pauses more like "Josette ... you have come back to me. ... I will not lose you again", with the last bit delivered with resoluteness.
And as for what's different about the direction and descriptions, Barnabas' beating of Willie transitions instantly to Barnabas entering Josette's room, though he doesn't simply stride in because he storms in, slamming the door against the wall - but he does stand there breathing hard for several beats - then he looks in the direction of Josette's portrait and begins to move toward it - and though the camera does move in closely on Barnabas in Scene 205, as can be seen in today's capture -
- the shot is an extremely close-up of Barnabas' face and not just his eyes, which do not fill the screen - and after Barnabas vows that he will not lose Josette again, his face takes on a fiercely determined expression.