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Current Talk '24 I / Re: And Now The Return of Another New Slideshow (Sort of), Part 2 [**Now featuring alternate versions of scenes - see replies #18,#21,#23,#49,#64,#69,#76,#88,#90,#100,#105,#107,#115**]
« on: July 08, 2017, 03:56:44 PM »
Moving on with more of Scene 128:
And that's when today's first quote -
- coming up, followed by today's second quote -
- coming up, followed by today's third quote -
- coming up.
And as far as the dialogue, the descriptions, the directions, and the notations go, as we can see in today's first capture -
- Liz has never gone to the window because she's still sitting at the table, and she never delivers the crossed out dialogue or any variation of it because it was the second example of dialogue being completely dropped from the scene (2 to go) - and DC added a notation after Stokes first quote from this section that says that Liz would cross to chair, presumably hers. which doesn't happen because she's still in it - and as we can see from these two enlargements of sections of today's second capture, as Todd asks Stokes how they can prove what David said -
- Julia looks over to Stokes - and before Stokes answers Todd, DC has a notation that he turns to Todd, which we can see in today's third capture -
- Stokes does, though another notation indicates that when Stokes turns the camera would rack focus on Stokes, but that doesn't happen, or at least we don't see it happen because when the camera shot changes, focus is already on Stokes. Also, what Stokes actually says is "By opening Carolyn's coffin."
Liz now turns from the window and crosses to Stokes. There is an indication of rising anger in her tone as she speaks. LIZ |
And that's when today's first quote -
Page 56/Scene 128 - Stokes: 'There is a way of proving whether or not the boy was right.'
- coming up, followed by today's second quote -
Page 56/Scene 128 - Todd: 'How?'
- coming up, followed by today's third quote -
Page 56/Scene 128 - Stokes (pauses): 'By opening Carolyn's grave.'
- coming up.
And as far as the dialogue, the descriptions, the directions, and the notations go, as we can see in today's first capture -
- Liz has never gone to the window because she's still sitting at the table, and she never delivers the crossed out dialogue or any variation of it because it was the second example of dialogue being completely dropped from the scene (2 to go) - and DC added a notation after Stokes first quote from this section that says that Liz would cross to chair, presumably hers. which doesn't happen because she's still in it - and as we can see from these two enlargements of sections of today's second capture, as Todd asks Stokes how they can prove what David said -
- Julia looks over to Stokes - and before Stokes answers Todd, DC has a notation that he turns to Todd, which we can see in today's third capture -
- Stokes does, though another notation indicates that when Stokes turns the camera would rack focus on Stokes, but that doesn't happen, or at least we don't see it happen because when the camera shot changes, focus is already on Stokes. Also, what Stokes actually says is "By opening Carolyn's coffin."