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« on: January 08, 2017, 04:28:10 AM »
And here's the way the two scenes are done in the first draft:
9 INT: MAGGIE'S ROOM - NIGHT 9 Maggie enters her room. She puts down the candelabra down. Then she stares out the window. Could David be outside? She suddenly knows very well that he could be and probably is. She makes the decision to go after him. She goes to her closet, picking up the candelabra. She opens the door of the closet. There is a flash of lightning. MAGGIE - FAST ZOOM TO CLOSE UP She SCREAMS 10 MAGGIE'S POV - INT. CLOSET 10 We see the SHADOW OF A BOY'S BODY hanging there. It is DAVID. ZOOM IN CLOSE UP. His neck appears to be broken. LAST CREDIT. |