Continuing with Scene 112, picking up with a notation from DC about how the camera would handle Carolyn:
MAGGIE - BARNABAS Pan her to them
Maggie is in some confusion as Carolyn ENTERS THE SHOT.
CAROLYN DEL ON X She X Mother wants to talk with you, Maggie.
BARNABAS And Maggie has something to say to her, don't you.
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And that's when today's first quote -
Page 43/Scene 112 - Maggie: 'How did you persuade me? How?'
- is scripted to come up on screen, followed in the script by:
Barnabas smiles down at her.
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And that's when today's second quote -
Page 43/Scene 112 - Maggie: 'Oh Carolyn, I'm going to stay.'
- is scripted to come up on screen, followed in the script by:
Carolyn turns and gives Barnabas an icy, jealous stare.
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And when it comes to the dialogue, the descriptions, and the directions, as we saw with one of yesterday's captures, Maggie is seen from behind when Carolyn appears in the library, so we do not see any sign from Maggie that she is in some confusion when Carolyn comes in - and would anyone care to hazard a guess as to what "DEL" is an abbreviation for because I have no clue what DC meant by it - and while Carolyn actually says "Maggie, Mother wants to talk with you", Barnabas delivers his dialogue exactly as scripted - but as we can definitely see from today's first capture, Maggie isn't -
- on screen when her reply to that comes up, and what she actually says is "Yes, I do. You've persuaded me" (and I love the look on Carolyn's face as she waits for the shoe to drop) - and that is followed by Maggie actually adding, also off screen, "Carolyn, I'm going to stay", dropping the "Oh", while Carolyn -
- gives Barnabas that icy, jealous stare and nods her head no, all of which Maggie is apparently oblivious to noticing. And DC's script had a notation that Carolyn would be in close-up when Maggie says she's staying, but it was mostly erased, and obviously she isn't in close-up in the film.