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Current Talk '24 I / Re: And Now The Return of Another New Slideshow (Sort of), Part 2 [**Now featuring alternate versions of scenes - see replies #18,#21,#23,#49,#64,#69,#76,#88,#90,#100,#105,#107,#115**]
« on: August 10, 2017, 06:46:58 PM »
Setting up the current scene. But actually, we need to backtrack to Scene 145 and deal with the opening few parts of the current scene differently that we normally do because there's an interesting change that DC made to his script:
And when it comes to the dialogue, the descriptions, the directions, and the notations, apparently at some point DC planned for the Deputy to show up in the middle of Scene 146 without us ever having seen Scene 145, but obviously things didn't play out that way - and neither today's first quote -
- nor any part of today's second quote -
-appears in the scene because Scene 146 actually opens with the sheriff already standing -
- and making his way to the doorway -
- and then, as can be seen in today's third capture, he turns back to Stokes to deliver today's third quote -
- exactly as scripted.
And I never realized that Stokes smokes so often in the film. He smokes during the dinner after Carolyn's funeral, and now he's smoking in this scene. Is there more smoking on his part to come?
_________________________________ / DEPUTY \ ________| Everything's fine. He's sleeping. | / \_________________________________/ 146 | | MO | INT. SH. OFFICE | SHERIFF | It's getting kind of late. Do | you still think she'll show tonight? | | STOKES | Yes. | (indicating a small black | leather bag) \ And when she does we'll be ready \ for her. \ (noticing frown on Sheriff's \ face.) \ What's wrong? \-----------> DEPUTY - APPEARS and exits SHERIFF x away I still feel we're taking a terrible chance with that boy's life. |
And when it comes to the dialogue, the descriptions, the directions, and the notations, apparently at some point DC planned for the Deputy to show up in the middle of Scene 146 without us ever having seen Scene 145, but obviously things didn't play out that way - and neither today's first quote -
Page 66/Scene 146 - Sheriff: 'It's getting kind of late. Do you still think she'll show tonight?'
- nor any part of today's second quote -
Page 66/Scene 146 - Stokes: 'Yes. (indicating a small black leather bag) And when she does we'll be ready for her. (noticing frown on Sheriff's face) What's wrong?'
-appears in the scene because Scene 146 actually opens with the sheriff already standing -
- and making his way to the doorway -
- and then, as can be seen in today's third capture, he turns back to Stokes to deliver today's third quote -
Page 66/Scene 146 - Sheriff: 'I still feel we're taking a terrible chance with that boy's life.'
- exactly as scripted.
And I never realized that Stokes smokes so often in the film. He smokes during the dinner after Carolyn's funeral, and now he's smoking in this scene. Is there more smoking on his part to come?